October 14th, 2012 at 12:34am
For your Sweet Tart:
To start off with, the whole layout is just beautiful. I really like the tone you've set, and everything matches perfectly together.
The summary you've written is very suspenseful, and definitely draws the reader in. I like the idea of a village, instead of just a town, ya know? I got a more personal and edgy feel.
I'm really enjoying how you're developing this story and the characters. Rachel is an amazing lead, and everyone else meshes in extremely well. I honestly feel like I'm reading a teen crime novel, or something of the sort. Your writing style is very unique, and I especially like how you modernize the characters. It helps us to relate better.
I'll definitely be subscribing. I'm excited to see what happens with this. Update soon!
The characters each have their own, haunting feeling, or that's what I get from it. I think this is written exceptionally well and will for sure be subscripting. Keep it up love!