Crossroads - Comments

I can't wait till tomorrow!!! XD Keep writing. I love this story.

I come to you via comment swap!!! That being said, this story isn't exactly my cup of tea; I don't usually read this kind of story. But I absolutely LOVE The Dark Knight!!! That being said, I do think this was very well written and creative. It was also very descriptive, which I liked. Great job and keep up the good work!!

You are a good writer with the ability to pace a story in a reasonable fashion; this is something that some authors struggle to do. There a re some grammar errors around, like the improper use of colons( : ) and semi-colons ( ; ); you have them confused. I've only recently taken to Batman after seeing the Dark Knight Rises, but I can say that I've always enjoyed the idea of the joker and I somehow see him as being this manic character. He always seems to be torn between emotions and will; yet I find him to be a sociopath, incapabe of emotions - Gah! The Joker immensly comfuses me sometimes. Anyway, good story, good writing. Keep on going.

Seriously woman with the cliffhangers u r killin me here just pure torture, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh my god! Stop leaving me like this! I loved the update, Hayley has serious balls.

I'm going to be honest, I love this story. I couldnt stop reading after the first chapter. Don't worry about the fillers, the help create the story. You are doing a wonderful job with the characters. Please keep writing!!

Stop worrying so much about your characterization. You are working with characters that have been reimagined with different writers and artists more times that I can count. Relax and write then how you feel most comfortable. I think you're doing a wonderful job. I like Harley more than I ever have before. Your writing style and character development are wonderful. I'm only six chapters in, but I think you're doing a wonderful job. Keep it up.

Love if, awww poor wittle Joker has a bruised ego how sad, I mean it's not every day a woman like Hayley can stand up for herself and not let ur creepy insane mind and killing sprees get to her as much it's ok becuz she is goin to kill u anyways, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Let me love you! UGH! Awesome update, hope you do it soon! =]

Love it, the detail in this chapter was great, I'm glad u enjoy Dark Knight Rises, ur friend Bonnie is hilarious I would be laughing my ass off too if I heard her say tht during the movie lol, anyhoo Bruce is becoming the protective brother now cuz the Joker hurt his sister and Bruce isn't lettin him get away with tht at all so Joker watch out cuz ur goin down dude I mean u made Hayley cry she isn't a crier especially when it comes to being in front of people yea u made her weak and Bruce is goin to find u and kill u for doin tht to her love cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Amazing update! I loved how much detail you put into this. And I love how you portray Bruce. He's so protective and kind and gorgeous and amazing and Christian Bale is the bestest. Awesome job! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Amazing update as always! That movie was great! Tom Hardy and Heath Ledger were perfect choices for villains

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wow, spent a good read :D
But definitely worth it. I've been looking for a Joker story for a while, and while searching, yours was the first one on the list. I must say, you right really well and the detail is great. I prefer longer chapters than short ones anyway, so yeah, just wanted to say it was an awesome read :D
update soon !

Darling! Bravo! I love how you added your own spin on that scene from The Dark Knight! Your details are just fine, your grammar as well, and the length is not bad at all. I loved this a lot, and I really hope you update soon.

That chapter was not shit and it was not too long! It was amazing. I, personally, loved it. I liked how you took the fundraiser scene from The Dark Knight and followed it basically word for word, except for adding Hayley and all that jazz. I can't believe she killed those goons! And I can't tell if she was lying or not, when she told the Joker he didn't know everything about her. Has she killed before? I loved this chapter. Again, it wasn't shit, I can tell that everything is going to escalate from here, like you said in the author's note. And I didn't see any grammatical mistakes or anything! Amazing job! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Love it, oh shit trouble is goin to hit the fan between Hayley and The Joker I'm excited :) at least Batman is ok tho just a little gun shot is all nothing major like gettin stabbed or anything, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Funnily enough, I know absolutely nothing about this universe you're writing in. Never read a comic, seen a movie, anything. Insane, right? Anyway, this story has made me want to pursue it... you make it all seem so interesting, far more than anything I've ever heard! The writing is eloquent and flows very nicely. I'm interested to see how it pans out! Sent here from comment swap, of course, and glad for it.

I am so thrilled to find out what happens next! You so have me glued to this laptop screen! If your language gets too crude, you can just change the rating, not a huge deal, but yeah. I loved this update! Update soon. I always get all antsy when I see that I get an e-mail. I pray it's because of your story. Ha.

This really needs more recommendations!

I'm really excited to see where this goes. At first I thought Hayley was going to fall in love with the Joker right off the bat, but it seems like you've got something a little more interesting in mind. That's awesome. I feel bad fro not having commented on the previous chapters and such until now. Writing of my own, haha. Poor Bruce! Gosh, I love your Bruce Wayne. Again, this story is awesome. I love the layout and your writing style. I can't wait to see what happens next!