Love it, I'm sure when Hayley gets in trouble, Bruce will forgive her....but I love their little relationship can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Comment swap. I am not a big fan of batman or joker cause they scared the shit out of me and this story kind of scares the shit out of me because of the layout, but I do like the story and the plot. I like the name that you pick for the main character and I love everything else. Update soon, yeah? (: would love to see more of this.
Oh my gosh, so, I finally caught up on all of the chapters. Sorry I haven't commented again. But holy crap I'm glad I finally did. This story is amazing, your writing is awesome. I love how much detail you put into everything, and I love how you portray the Joker. Very nice job. I loved Candice too, she made me laugh Hayley is getting to be a very intersting character, I can't wait to see what actually happens in the end. Ah, over-protective Bruce. He's so cute when he's worried, haha. Amazing job! Can't wait to read the next update!
In chapter 5 u lied but lucky for u, u redeemed urself and posted Joler in the sixth chapter so now I don't have to write u a rude letter in ur comment box lol, anyhoo Hayley is pretty ballsy for laughing in the Joker's face but it's watever, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Beautifully written, I was completely intrigued! The Arkham ending made me excited, can't wait for the Joker to be introduced! I'm keen to see how they'll act towards each other. Again, beautiful writing. Subscribed! :)
This is really interesting, I like that you put Arkham so close to the 'normal' area of Gotham. I can't wait to find out what goes on when she is in there.
Pretty amazing update. You are still doing good writing this story. I didn't say in my first comment that I am not really a Batman fan-fiction reader, but something about this story makes me want to read more of it. It is just a really interesting story so far that captures my attention. Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next update. I should also thank Comment Swap for bringing me to this amazing story :)
Hi there! I was brought here by comment swap. Anyways, I love how your vocabulary is very broad and wide ranged. This is a good story so far, and I love this relationship between hayley and Bruce. I enjoyed reading it, and I can't wait till your next update. Keep writing! -Kaitlyn
Love it, I like Hayley and Bruce's love/hate relationship it's cute and funny even tho they r just friends tht's been living together for three years, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
comment swap! I loved it! seriously youre an amazing writer. The story line is interesting and never gets boring and all the drama is relevent. Keep writing!!