I'm on the first chapter and I'm already hooked, you've got so much raw passion in it already that makes it so amazing. Your layout and banner is gorgeous and I'm defiantly subscribing and recommending :) Please have a look at my own stories, although I feel quite adequate to you.
You have absolutely some of the best descriptions on this site, I swear. It feels I am experiencing the plot as one of your characters, and not just a mere reader. If I HAD to pick one of my favorite physical descriptions from the story it would have to be "Her face was ashen, resigned". The physical, emotional, mental, and metaphorical meanings behind this one sentence are infinite and you truly do have a gift. You're an extremely blessed writer and I hope you never, ever, ever stop writing because you're truly magnificent at it!
Firstly, I love your layout, It's simple and easy to read, but still very beautiful. The banner is nice too. This kept me interested throughout, you leave things very open and it keeps the reader wondering things, like others I found myself wondering who Sam was, and I just had to read on and try to find out. I think this is very well written, you mix dialogue and descriptions perfectly and I wish you luck with this.