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  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, glad and had fun can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 12th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, the location of Joker is known and I'm sure he is goin to be waiting for Hayley, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 11th, 2013 at 03:00am
  • creeps

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    getting so close to some mr. jay, eeeep
    November 11th, 2013 at 01:19am
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    -double
    November 11th, 2013 at 01:19am
  • enchntedtomeet

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    ooooh yes. keep it going
    November 10th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, hi Kyle!! can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 31st, 2013 at 08:22pm
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Thanks for updating! I always liked Kyle haha
    October 27th, 2013 at 05:26am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Thanks for updating! I always liked Kyle haha
    October 27th, 2013 at 05:26am
  • leprechaun_katt

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    I'm on the first chapter and I'm already hooked, you've got so much raw passion in it already that makes it so amazing. Your layout and banner is gorgeous and I'm defiantly subscribing and recommending :) Please have a look at my own stories, although I feel quite adequate to you.
    September 29th, 2013 at 10:43pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    You have absolutely some of the best descriptions on this site, I swear. It feels I am experiencing the plot as one of your characters, and not just a mere reader. If I HAD to pick one of my favorite physical descriptions from the story it would have to be "Her face was ashen, resigned". The physical, emotional, mental, and metaphorical meanings behind this one sentence are infinite and you truly do have a gift. You're an extremely blessed writer and I hope you never, ever, ever stop writing because you're truly magnificent at it!

    God Bless!!

    xoxo
    September 29th, 2013 at 08:29pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, poor Hayley she is goin to get revenge on the Joker some way somehow, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 27th, 2013 at 12:55am
  • daughterofRAGEandLOV

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    Really liked this chapter,you did a awesome job righting the joker can't wait for the next one!
    September 17th, 2013 at 07:15am
  • MoMo_92

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    Oh no poor Sam, the Joker got to him tht fucking sucks anyhoo great chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 16th, 2013 at 09:07pm
  • jason todd.

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    It would be nice if you would stop writing such perf stuff.
    September 16th, 2013 at 12:19am
  • MoMo_92

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    Sam's her brother, hmmm intrigued and the Joker and the mob r at a stand off right now, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    September 9th, 2013 at 07:30am
  • Snow.White.Queen.

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    Firstly, I love your layout, It's simple and easy to read, but still very beautiful. The banner is nice too. This kept me interested throughout, you leave things very open and it keeps the reader wondering things, like others I found myself wondering who Sam was, and I just had to read on and try to find out. I think this is very well written, you mix dialogue and descriptions perfectly and I wish you luck with this. Smile
    August 20th, 2013 at 01:40pm
  • jason todd.

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    I can't even with you.
    August 9th, 2013 at 08:44pm
  • mrs.stiglitz4207

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    I thought this chapter was very beautiful i loved it<3
    July 31st, 2013 at 05:52pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, he is so crazy can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    July 31st, 2013 at 12:00am
  • imdancingalone

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    I adore this story :) Have fun in Italy!!!!
    July 25th, 2013 at 06:01pm