Crossroads - Comments

Aww, it wasn't a dog. :(

Love it, so who's Sam? Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I absolutely positively love this story and can't wait for more.. update soon!! :)

I'm goin to assume tht Sam is her brother anyhoo what did u do this time Hayley can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Some sort of relative! OR A DOG THAT WAS SUPPOSED TO RUN AWAY!! :D

Sams her brother, thats my guess and oh btw i love you too

Oooh is Sam like her brother or something? Ugh I love this story. And your other story. They're both so perfect

Oh dear its getting real. who are these people?!

Oh lord, is Sam a past lover maybe? A brother? A cousin? Oh shiiit. So many possibilities with that. && I HOPE Joker makes his first appearance. It'd make my heart happy♥

*Bites down hard on nails*

Commment Swap: I think that this is a refreshing story to find. From the fist chapter there is a startling realness to the outrageous world the story stems from. I think that it's due to how the world is set up, too often authors get wrapped up in over describing the environment, but it hits just right here. And I personally know how it much it sucks to have hot ashes fall on bad skin. The second chapter follows in the way that less is sometimes more. Those little things that get overlooked in writing is make your character more memorable here, more real, and all the more reason for readers to come back. All in all, this doesn't feel like fan fiction so far, it's wonderful.

Oh my!! Such a teaser ♥

I'm dying with these short chapters.

Ehrmahgerd This is amazing. Please update soon! Girl I have missed you lol by now you should know how much I love my Joker!

She would have done what, kill someone, kill the person she is talking what is goin on, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Suspenseful! Love it!

Comment swap.
Such an interesting story. I love your layout, it is so elegant. You write wonderfully and have set up everything nicely. Descriptions are amazing, too. Your writing is so unique and I'm in love with the whole vibe I get. Good work!

I'm loving it. This is actually the first story I've read on this website, and I'm actually rather glad that I managed to get to yours! Wow, the descriptions are pretty awesome, and that hanging ending 'She answered the phone' frustrates me because I want to read the conversation!!!! X)

I didn't get the chance to read this before the "reboot" thing but the first two chapters are awesome ^_^ keep it up :)

First two chapters are interesting. Can't wait to see where this will go! hope you update soon!