Hazy Days - Comments

Phenomenal. Utterly phenomenal. Uggggghhhh, I'm just so mad I read it all so quickly. It ended too soon, haha! So good. :)

you're honestly so talented
really really reaaaalllllyyy loved this

OHMYGOODNESS THIS IS ABSOLUTE BRILLIANCE
btdubs Joel could be hot but his personality is shit so
0/100 would not bang and omg Oliver let me love u down pls I promise I will love u forever <33333
100/100 would bang slam do

Wow, I absolutely adore the first line. I don't know what it is about it, but it sucked me right in. Another aspect that sucked me in is the fact that you've used Victoria as a character name. It's my own name, and I hardly see anyone using it in stories, so I give you kudos for using such an awesome name (ha ha).

But yeah, onto the story itself. Your plotline is really unique. Instead of the typical boy-meets-girl-and-lives-happily-ever-after scenario that I see so many times on here, you show the real aspects to certain relationships, the bad side that counteracts good and I think that's great. Joel interests me as a character as well, he seems to be slightly schizophrenic, in a dulled way. He can be happy one minute and want to kill Victoria the next. Again, the way you write is lovely, I really enjoy reading it. Your description is flawless. The only thing I could suggest is what isadora is dead hs suggested below. Your description can sometimes be a little off, so I'd take a proper look at that.

This is a fab story, I really enjoyed it.

This was one of the best things I've read in a while. I can't even tell you what I liked about it so much. It was so real, so well written...the only things I saw that needed fixing are your paragraphs. Some of them are super long and some of them, you have dialogue right up in the middle where it doesn't belong.

But I pretty much ignored that because this was so amazing and I literally just sat here and read it in two hours.

All done! Wow! My only, small criticism is that I think your chapters could do with being a little longer but seriously, it doesn't detract from what a super story this is. I love the last chapter; you've ended it well. I definitely thi m there's a sequel in you somewhere. Very well done

Chapter 20: OH MY GOD; I love it! That is all

Sorry I haven't had chance to read this in forever BUT I've been busy with my own story, 'Good For Nothing'. The sign of a good story is that you can remember the plot and pick up pretty much exactly where you left off. Just read chapter 17 and I'm stillin love with this story. Finally, Tori is accepting her feelings for Oliver. I hope they get together

Okay, I suck because I haven't read the last few updates when you updated them BUT I AM NOW CAUGHT UP. Even though it was short and Victoria's decision looked a little abrupt, I like that you wrote it like that because you can tell already how fed she was about Joel. THIS WAS PERFECT IN SO MANY WAYS <3

Ok, this was seriously amazing. I've been a silent reader all this time, but I've decided to speak up. I absolutely loved this story. I love how you well developed the characters were and I loveddd Oliver. I really hope there's a sequel or something, because you can't just leave us hanging like this.

THIS. IS. SO. AMAZING. I just read the entire thing in one go and I'm so attached

This story is amazing. Like holy shit I hope you update soon amazing because it's 1.15am right now in my neck of the woods and I know that when I eventually go to sleep tonight I'm going to be thinking about it and for fuck's sake Vicki leave Joel that asshole.

Excuse my language but with the way this story is going if Joel pulls more douchey moves in which I know he very so obviously will I will be swearing a shitload more. Joel frustrates me. OLIVER IS SO CUTE THOUGH GO OLI GO WIN VICKI'S HEART YOU GO GURL

Joel is one messed up son of a bitch.

I'm bang up to date now and OH.MY.WORD; this story is just so readable. I know I haven't been able to read for a while but it just goes to show how amazing an author you are when I can get straight back into the story and remember why I loved it so much in the first place. Just amazing. Well done chuck

Fourteen: Poor Tori. Soooo sad. Love this chapter too. Do you think I might like this story? Hell yeah!

Thirteen: once again; perfect! I'm gunning for Tori and Oliver to get together. You write so well; I love the pace, I love the plot and I love your charachters. You NEED to publish this!

Twelve: awwwwww, this just proves my previous comment. Absolutely excellent chapter.

Eleven: Joel's a complete Jekyll & Hyde charachter; one minute he's the perfect boy friend the next he's scum and you convey this so very well in your writing. Victoria is a victim but she has a little fight in her. She stands up for herself even though she knows she'll get beat. She knows she shouldn't be in this relationship but at the same time she's in love. I'm looking forward to seeing what role Oliver takes in the story but I have a feeling it's going to cause major ructions!

Absolutely wonderful writing again my dear. Hope you had a fabulous Christmas and wishing you a very happy new year

Awe that's cute can't wait for the next one

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
fave chapter already.
I love Oliver so much. omfg.
please update this soon man.