Hazy Days - Comments

This is a really good story.
I like the pretty butterfly ..... Sorry, easily destracted.

aw this chapter made me so sad
Joel sucks.
Where's Oliver? I want Oliver plz
(lol I forgot the O and it just said liver)
UPDATE.

UGH I LOVE OLIVER
except he's dumb for not doing anything
BUT STILL
this is weird for me to say, but I want to see some Joel hehe. I like that name. I think of Joel Kanitz from This Century and that's horrible because Joel Kanitz is an angel and this Joel is like the devil so no
but yeah
update sooooooooooooooooooooon!

aw Shawn is so cute. and poor Victoria! so much shit in her life :(
update soon bebs :)

OLIVER IS SO CUTE I CAN'T EVEN
and tiramisu muffins? sweet baby jesus I want.
please update this soon because this story is just great :)

Wowowow, I really really like this.
It's actually realistic compared to all the other shit on this site(:
You've got talent. You're really a great writer.
Update soon:3

forty kids in one class? that's a big ass class man.
but omg I like Oliver. He sounds cayoot.
Okay that last part with Joel makes me ship them but I'm leaning towards Oliver/Victoria
I can't choose.
Actually I can BECAUSE DOMESTIC ABUSE IS WRONG but maybe it's a fetish or something...
update sooooooon!

NEW GUY
OOOOOO
WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN
UPDATE MAAN

HOW DID I MISS TWO CHAPTERS WHAT
sorry bb
but this is so good, as usual. It's actually makin' me sad. wtf kind of relationship is this?!?!?!
#JEAH BECAUSE RYAN LOCHTE IS THE LOVE OF MY LIFE. and Michael Phelps but I'm mad at him for dating a stupid, blonde model/cocktail waitress -___-
update soooon :)

I really feel for Tori! I can't say I understand or could ever imagine what she's going through but you've summed it up so well in that last chapter. What Joel does to Tori is absolutely disgusting and she knows that full well, but behind all that she can still somehow see the man she fell in love with and it really is just heartbreaking but so unbelievably powerful.

So well written; perfectly paced! Cannot fault this story one iota. Oh, and thank you so much for the mention in the authors note; lovely of you to add that.

Don't suppose you could check out my latest story if you haven't already. It's called 'Good For Nothing'.

Lucy

All up to date. You must carry on with this story; it's too good!

That ending to Chapter 6 is PERFECT! Poor Tori. Glad she's leaving Joel. He's horrible. I love your writing style. Reads really well; fast paced.

Wow! Just finished chapter 4. LOVE THIS. It's heartbreaking, unnerving and loving. Not three words you'd generally use in the same sentence. Awesome work. Seriously

omfg what happened with her mom
I loved this chapter! I like that it gave a slight insight into Victoria's life, rather than her life with Joel. update sooooon gurlfran <3

ahdhjksadhasjd; I really love this. A lot.

OH GOD. HE'S ABUSIVE AND HE'S DOIN' IT WITH ANOTHER WOMAN (or man...?).
my creys. Victoria needs to get out now.

aw aw aww. Gosh I can't wait for more!!

LOL A STREET URCHIN
AW THIS WAS SO CUTE :3
I want a puppy dammit.
update soooon! :)

technology issues- story of my life :/
Anyway, I really really like it- It's interesting unlike all the boring cliches you have to dig through to find something good like this so for that, thank youuu :)

omg I feel like that all the time, especially when my laptop crashes, which is often -__- THAT SCENE IS ALWAYS A GOOD REFERENCE.

THIS CHAPTER OH GOD. WTF IS WRONG WITH JOEL? LIKE DOES HE HAVE SOME SORT OF ILLNESS BECAUSE THAT JUST AIN'T NORMAL. They are so fucked up. I love it.
Update soooooooooooooooon <3