Hazy Days - Comments

So I stayed up a little past my bedtime and greatly enjoyed this.

It's interesting. It's fast paced, and without saying much (I mean this in a good way) you reveal a lot about the relationship between Victoria and Joel. Well written, and it keeps its reader wondering where it's going to lead. Keep this up!

I love it so far. c:

Chapter 1: LOVE THIS! I love the fact it's not just some other gushy love story. I like the relationship in this first chapter; something I can relate to. Perfect grammar and spelling very well written.

Hooked. I really like it so far. Stoked for more! :D

AW
JOEL AND VICTORIA
ugh Joel needs to stawp because he's gonna die and everyone will be sad. Myself very much included :(
update soon gurlfran <3

I like this mucho. I like stories with relationships like this. I hope it gets better though :3
Update soon! :)

WHAT IS THIS
OMG
I LIKE THIS. I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT IS HAPPENING
BUT I LIKE IT AND NOW I'M SUBSCRIBED.
UPDATE SOON!