Rosie - Comments

I love how you have pictures for what the characters look like! I also really like the size of you paragraphs, your characterization, and your use of dialog versus other writing. Great job, can't wait to read more!

Oh man they finally kiss and then get cock blocked by a Berry - and damn being in a bathroom when a guy shits has got to be torture lol Are you sure she passed out from drinking, or was it from suffocation? :p

Well that was shitty for Rosie. Litterally. :P This was a great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one (:

this chapter was awesome, i loved it!

Oh my god I fucking love this story! Please write more & soon!

i'm glad you're back, this story's great!

OOOOOHHH MYYY GOOOODDDDD!!! I've missed this story! So glad you're working on it again. Welcome back! Update soon :D

Welcome back hun, I've missed this story!

I love that Rosie is becoming more comfortable around Jimmy, even though he did name a crab Bill lol

I hope Matt doesn't fuck things up with Val :-(

YAY! You're back! (: lol I love this story &The fact that Rosie is becoming more comfortable around Jimmy. I wonder what's gonna happen with Matt and Valary.... Update soon!

Rosie needs to warm up to Jimmy and get comfortable, like BeenDownThatRoad said. This is such a great story! Update soon <3

Ahhhh i hate the fact that i haven't been on in so long, I miss all the good updates! Well this one was amazing, aww poor Val :( update soon please!

Ahhhh i hate the fact that i haven't been on in so long, I miss all the good updates! Well this one was amazing, aww poor Val :( update soon please!

rosie's gonna get excessively drunk, again, and have sex with jimmy. i just know it.

haha, i want to know what happened on their wild blackout night? I wonder who got the five in the eye? lol.
I felt for val at the end of this, i think everybody at some point has a situation close to this with the opposite sex where your left hanging, wondering what the hell is going on.Men! lol.
Rosie made me sad in this too. I hope she starts to get more and more comfortable with Jimmy, he is such a sweetie to her. Loved it. update soon:)

Love it!!!!! Awww I've got a really cute image in my head of Jimmy looking like a hedgehog with a backwards shirt and Simpsons boxers. Mmmmm :p

Poor Jimmy has to be so confused at Rosie's bipolarness - the poor guy probably doesn't know how to react to her some times. I think he was a bit hurt when she blew him off.

Awww poor Val :-( I hope she didn't freak out Matt and he takes off for the hills

I loved that chapter!

I gotta say that I'm curious as to how Jimmy's shirt was on backwards...

I feel so bad for Val, but I bet she's getting worked up about nothing!

More please. Now actually.

So I just discovered this and it is so so awesome! I love your writing and literally laugh out loud at some of the dialogue. That's not easily done, so bravo! I love your characters. I find Zacky and Dawn so damn cute and I really really like Rosie! I hope she starts to open up more and of course I want to know her story, but Im sure in time it will come out in the story. Lots of love! Cant wait for more:)

AHHHH! the update was amazingggg! :D
I absolutely loved it, deeply!
Im sorry it took so long to comment, but ive been so busy.
Anyway, update soon!

Haha she is gonna be a zombie in the morning .

Aww Zacky and Dawn . Cute