Heh, I basically read all the chapters within the last couple days. This story is lovely, and it makes me laugh at really awkward times when I'm reading it in public places. Please do continue. I love it. c:
Dear lord, the update was FANFUCKINGTASTIC! I loved it, absolutely LOVED it! Jimmy is such a dork, a cute dork! Thanks for mentioning me I feel special teehee cant wait! :D
TRUST JIMMY TO LOVE HAVING THE MAKEUP ON I'm so glad that Jimmy and Dawn are getting closer ^.^ I'm disappointed for Jimmy that he didn't catch the seagull! I'm super curious about what happened to Dawn, I've got an idea but I don't want to say anything in case I'm wrong :P
oh my god I had tears of laughter in my eyes reading the guys punishment for being creepers. I pictured Brian with curly Shirley Temple hair and just about lost it. Poor Johnny is probably gonna have nightmares about a curling wand stuck up his ass :p
I love how Jimmy is being so friendly and gradually wearing down her resistance, though I did laugh when he took off running after the seagull. He should remember that the way to a seagull's heart is french fries - last time I went to the beach and I had hot chips (as we call them) I ended up with 30 of the little buggers camped around me lol