Broken Arrow - Comments

Love it, I'm glad tht Ruby and Brian worked out their problems and tht Ruby realized tht Brian was right about Jack and shit, anyhoo great chapter ot was amazing can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Finally you updated! :D I'm glad Brian realised how much of a dick he'd been towards Ruby, can't wait for more ^.^

omg at first I was like no Brian you're a dick but awwww I'm glad he realised his mistake.
Can't wait for the next update, I love this story! n.n

God Brian I'm glad tht u realized how harsh u was to Ruby, anyhoo love this chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Wow a little harsh there Brian but Ruby had to hear it regardless if it's a little early in the break up but Ruby needs to open her eyes and realize tht her relationship with Jack was complete bullshit and in only for her to see tht is for a good friend to tell her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

awww this story is so perfect. ^_^
Can't wait for the next update.

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Ah, I like it a lot better now you've slowed them both down :) can't wait for next update :'D

Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, I love the Slender chapter lol can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love it, it was a super cute sweet chapter, it warned my heart when Brian was tearing up while beggin Ruby to stay in Orange County, anyhoo love the story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ MoMo_92
Awwh! I'm glad you approve!
I'm going to try and get the next chapter done in another day or so
I was at Steel Panther last night so I'm pretty tired :P

I like the revision version of this story, it's more patient instead of instant sexy time or fluff, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

@ Shazza Rose
Ok got it can't wait to read the revised version :)

@ Shazza Rose
Do you have an idea when the nex chapters will be up?

@ SynxDeepxInxYour
I certainly hope so!

Yay!!! Hopefully it turns out like you want this time (:

@ MoMo_92
I'm re-writing it from the beginning, some chapters have been lengthened, others shortened, the smut has been taken out (but will return later in the story) and a new first chapter was been written.

Which chapters r rewritten?

Which chapters have you rewritten?