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  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, I'm glad tht Ruby and Brian worked out their problems and tht Ruby realized tht Brian was right about Jack and shit, anyhoo great chapter ot was amazing can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 16th, 2012 at 10:13am
  • v3ng3ance

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    Finally you updated! :D I'm glad Brian realised how much of a dick he'd been towards Ruby, can't wait for more ^.^
    November 18th, 2012 at 12:34pm
  • Its_Your_Nightmare

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    omg at first I was like no Brian you're a dick but awwww I'm glad he realised his mistake.
    Can't wait for the next update, I love this story! n.n
    November 16th, 2012 at 09:07am
  • MoMo_92

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    God Brian I'm glad tht u realized how harsh u was to Ruby, anyhoo love this chapter can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 16th, 2012 at 02:28am
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    Wow a little harsh there Brian but Ruby had to hear it regardless if it's a little early in the break up but Ruby needs to open her eyes and realize tht her relationship with Jack was complete bullshit and in only for her to see tht is for a good friend to tell her, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    November 9th, 2012 at 08:35am
  • Its_Your_Nightmare

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    awww this story is so perfect. ^_^
    Can't wait for the next update.
    November 9th, 2012 at 08:11am
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    Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 25th, 2012 at 05:19pm
  • v3ng3ance

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    Ah, I like it a lot better now you've slowed them both down :) can't wait for next update :'D
    October 21st, 2012 at 07:22pm
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    Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 20th, 2012 at 07:06pm
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    Love it, I love the Slender chapter lol can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 12th, 2012 at 06:58pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, it was a super cute sweet chapter, it warned my heart when Brian was tearing up while beggin Ruby to stay in Orange County, anyhoo love the story can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 11th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • Red-Lips-Like-Razors

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    @ MoMo_92
    Awwh! I'm glad you approve!
    I'm going to try and get the next chapter done in another day or so
    I was at Steel Panther last night so I'm pretty tired :P
    October 10th, 2012 at 08:47am
  • MoMo_92

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    I like the revision version of this story, it's more patient instead of instant sexy time or fluff, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    October 9th, 2012 at 02:22am
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    @ Shazza Rose
    Ok got it can't wait to read the revised version :)
    October 2nd, 2012 at 04:45am
  • SynxDeepxInxYour

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    @ Shazza Rose
    Do you have an idea when the nex chapters will be up?
    October 2nd, 2012 at 03:18am
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    @ SynxDeepxInxYour
    I certainly hope so! Very Happy
    October 2nd, 2012 at 03:16am
  • SynxDeepxInxYour

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    Yay!!! Hopefully it turns out like you want this time (:
    October 2nd, 2012 at 03:15am
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    @ MoMo_92
    I'm re-writing it from the beginning, some chapters have been lengthened, others shortened, the smut has been taken out (but will return later in the story) and a new first chapter was been written.
    October 2nd, 2012 at 03:12am
  • MoMo_92

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    Which chapters r rewritten?
    October 2nd, 2012 at 01:36am
  • SynxDeepxInxYour

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    Which chapters have you rewritten?
    October 1st, 2012 at 07:37pm
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