Broken Arrow - Comments

I agree with SynxDeepxInxYour, just make Ruby and Brian realize tht they r moving a little too fast and have them slow down but no conflict between them tho

Maybe have them realize they're moving too fast. I think you should keep them together and not have conflict while she gets over jack cause there's still him getting over Jenna, so I think just have them slow down (:

I think you should just slow it down and not start it over or break them up. Just slow it down. Because I love them together and love the way it's been going any way.

Tht was hot shower sexy time I have ever read made my body tingle in the most pleasurable way, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Yay they r boyfriend and girlfriend now yay!!!!!!! Anyhoo wow Jack u insecured jackass like seriously ur tht paranoid tht u accuse ur girlfriend of cheating on u, maybe ur the one tht cheated on her first which made u act like tht, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

YES!!!! They're together finally! This chapter is the by far my favorite one so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I love the story! Its so adorable!

Sexy time better be in the next chapter, anyhoo tht was the greatest prank ever, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This story is fucking sexy as hell I don't know who r the silent readers tht are not commenting on this story becuz this story is amazing and I think u silent readers r insane for not commenting on this story like seriously sexy time with Brian is fan-fucking-tastic like I want to be Ruby right now cuz he is a fucking master at sexy time, anyhoo I think tht Brian and Ruby make a cute couple and tht they r goin to fall in love with each other in the end of the story, Jack and Jenna u r heartless bastards and can burn in hell with each other for hurting Brian and Ruby, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This story is so good and you should completely keep updating even if you don't get comments. But this story is super hot and I cant wait to see what happens next:)

Loving the story. Can't wait to see what happens next.