A Mouse Named Rupert - Comments

@ aubs
I'm not sure if I told you, but your comment brightened my day <3

@ moonmagic
Yeah, I would like to add more detail, but Rupert IS only a mouse lol we can't expect much =p maybe throughout the chapters I'll add little tidbits here and there

Okay, that was the funniest thing I've read here. I love the fact that you name the animals, but I would have liked some description. Your story made me smile widely though. I know, that's wrong. Poor Rupert :P

Oh goodness, this was amazing, yet kind of sad at the same time. I love how it was told in the point of view of a mouse. I've always enjoyed reading stories told in animal point of views, but have yet to find many on this website.

I think one thing that I really liked about this was the lack of description, especially about the setting. It kept me wondering on what was happening in the world around them, but it didn't seem important for Rupert to explain since he was a mouse. But anyway, I think this was a wonderfully short piece that was definetly worth the read!

I wonder that as well. However, you already named it and made me smile at that so, why not?

Oh and your story was a bit severe for the mouse. A little bit more description around your new time would be good. People are worried about the end of the world right? So you should maybe make that a little more dramatic.

You should check out understatement, that's just about what you did here. It's funny how you contrasted it.

If it's 2030 how come the mouse isn't a mutated size? There's enough pollution for that, I'm sure.

Farewell! I'm glad I got to read another one your stories.