It's Time for Something Real - Comments

  • JustShrugAtlas

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    Ermergerd. That was hot. I can't believe he said it was a mistake. He needs to be a rule breaker. You need to have a mix of safety and danger in life or else it's not worth living. I really hope they'll start seeing each other, like going on dates and stuff. :D I'm really excited to see. I just realized that Nikki would flip seven shits if he ever found out about those two, if they ever date. :P
    October 24th, 2012 at 10:47pm
  • gothique4

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    Ooh I wish Jacob would get over the whole "but you're Steven's daughter" thing. Or maybe he'd prefer to leave her for lecherous ol Nikki who's twice her age
    October 24th, 2012 at 01:29pm
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Good lord. Matt and his gaming -_-. Of course Desi is gonna try to talk her friend up :-). Hot damn those two need to get over the whole Steven thing. Something is obviously there. Loooved it
    October 24th, 2012 at 08:54am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    OMGOSHTHEYKISSEDAGAINANDIHAVESOMANYFEELSRIGHTNOW. ahahaha. pushy women are great women, don't you think? I think Roxy and Tessa need to be friends. ha. haha. she really forced him into it, though. i get where he's coming from, and didn't she say the same thing earlier? i think she's just as confused. i know that if i were standing in front of him, and he was like "i have feelings for you" i'd go all in, too. that's for DAMN sure!!
    October 24th, 2012 at 07:27am
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    I loved it. He's such a sweetheart. I need to start listening to Lynam because I can't hear Jacob's voice in my head. I really love the way Jacob acts. I know he's really tall so in a way he's a gentle giant. :) I would love to meet him. I can't wait to see what happens next. The ball is in Jacob's court now.
    October 20th, 2012 at 07:41pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    I seriously think my heart just melted...that was so cute at the end! I love the chemistry between these two. The whole thing was so pure and beautiful. Really well written:)
    October 20th, 2012 at 08:12am
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Awe it was such a good chapter. from being told how her life was playing out while he was there. Oooo they kissed. loooved it.
    October 20th, 2012 at 07:48am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    WWWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE i loved it :D
    October 20th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • gothique4

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    I love Matt too - he's such a cheeky little shit in this :p
    Aww, he's not getting a threesome lol

    I love how Roxanne and Jacob are still kinda awkward with each other. He's a shy little thing isn't he?
    October 16th, 2012 at 03:54am
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    I do love Matt a lot in this. I love how you portray him. I love how their relationship is so playful. I also love how much Roxie is crushing on Jacob and plays it so cool. I could never do that. I make my attraction obvious. I'm just weird like that. I can't wait for the update. :D
    October 16th, 2012 at 01:14am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    lol, I too love Matt in this, I hope he really is like this, and I really really love Slash in this...I laughed when she shut down Nikki, sadly, im sure a lot of women buy these rockers lines, only to be used and discarded just like Roxanne rationalized...can't say it wouldn't be fun in the moment though..lol. I cant wait for more. I love that her and Jacob were doing a little mild banter flirting in this, I really like how chill he is...more soon please!
    October 16th, 2012 at 12:52am
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Lmao I think everyone reading this loves them both. They are quite the characters lmao. That wasn't all that awkward. Okay maybe a little lol. But it's good she's getting to know him lol. lmao I'm sure he can't wait for the schooling ;-). Loooved it.
    October 16th, 2012 at 12:29am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    PPFFFTTTT. Matt cracks me the hell up. NO SIR. NO THREESOME FOR YOU. ahahaa. and i love love LOVE the sexual tension between roxanne and jacob. like, they're both obviously uncomfortable, but they don't want to be one-upped or something. it's great. David. as a prostitute. I COULD SEE IT. even though he's taken, too :( balls.
    October 15th, 2012 at 11:52pm
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Lmao oh the banter between Rox and Matt. It's like they're actually siblings lmao. She hurt his fragile ego lmao. Sounds like Rox has them wrapped around her finger ;-). I would love to have Myles do that for real. Just saying ;-). Uh oh a promise if they're ever alone. Loved it.
    October 12th, 2012 at 07:09am
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    Ermergerd. I love Jacob to the extreme. Almost as much as I love my boyfriend...believe me..that's a lot. I have a feeling after he sings to her they're gonna kiss and fall in love. It might be a while before they kiss but it's gonna happen. Update soon please. :D
    October 12th, 2012 at 01:38am
  • CharlieHunnam

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    ahhh, loved it. there's something for them to look forward to between them!! if jacob's attracted at all, that is. i guess we'll find out. ahh, i love the interaction between ALL of them!
    October 12th, 2012 at 12:58am
  • JustShrugAtlas

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    Matt got owned by a girl. He might need some ice for that BURN! :P Anyway, I love how they can just talk so easily. No one is straining to find a topic, it just flows. Jacob has a crush on her. I can just feel it. :P Anyway, I hope you update soon. I can taste my excitement. :D
    October 8th, 2012 at 10:37pm
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Hahaha she owned Matt in that game lmao. Poor guy haha. Ooo sounds like an interesting time even if it started off a bit awkward. Loooved it.
    October 8th, 2012 at 10:24pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Aww, they finally talk, and surprise, they enjoy each other:)
    I can't wait for more of this!

    And ahah Matt! She killed your cocky ass:P I wonder how many people he has played alongside on their that have zero clue its Shadows:P that's awesome!

    More more more please!
    October 8th, 2012 at 08:00pm
  • gothique4

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    I love this. Jacob is just so adorable and it's obvious that he's got a thing for Roxanne just as much as she has for him. Can't wait to read more.

    And yay, she managed to beat the mighty Shadows at COD :-)
    October 8th, 2012 at 09:56am