It's Time for Something Real - Comments

i loved it :D the shy-chemistry between them is just freaking fantastic!

Yay, A JB Dizz small mention..haha, I love that guy. Anyways, great update, its nice to learn a little more about her. I couldnt imagine being 15 yrs old and working in a strip club, how terrifying!
Poor Zacky, trying to work his charm, only for her to be thinking about another guy..cant wait to see what will happen between her and Jacob when they actually talk to each other!!!
And lastly, why am I not surprised that ladies man Brian disappeared with a stripper? hah, this story is just too good! Now I want more..ha

well holy moley donut shop! aint even talked to the kid and she's thinkin about him. hm.. i wonder what that means for the foochure ;) UPDATE NOW, PLEASE.

Uhoh. She's having day dreams about Jacob while kissing Zacky? no beuno. I wonder what's gonna happen when she actually starts talking to him. Update as soon as possible.

loved the update and was good to a little glimpse into Roxanne's past.

Ooh, Jacob popping up in her head when she's kissing Zacky is very telling - poor Zacky got cock blocked by someone who wasn't even there lol

Looking forward to reading more

My goodness what a life to have lived at that age. Hahaha poor Desi. And it's good she has them for back up. Gah Zacky and his being in her bubble uninvited lol. Well atleast he stuck to his word and she only worked as a waitress. Looooved it

i just love how you're keeping them all pretty much close to who they'd be in real life. i loved this chapter & i definitely can't wait for more!!! :D

damn that sounds like an awesome party. It seems that Jacob is a wee bit jealous and thinks that she's with Steven.

Tommy and Nikki are dirty ol pervs aren't they? lol

lmao that is one hell of a get together and I love how Roxie bossed the Avenged guys around. Oh lord I know Tommy was not about to mention that -_-. Looooved it.

Oh yeah, I forgot the best part..TOM PETTY...HELL YEAH! lol. All the youngens are probably like Tom who?, but I loved it. Thats a great song:D. Maroon five is good too, and I would definitely be right there laughing with you if I saw Miles Kennedy doing his best Xtina impersonation..I love Slash in this too, the 'horse cock' comment had me laughing out loud, i hope there is a lot more of him in this awesome story. Keep up the fan-fucking tastic writing:)

So many good parts in this update.! Tommy boob watching, Jacob probably thinking that she is with Steven, Nikki fangirling in the audience...lol. And her best friend cracking me up ""I'LL LOVE YOU IN A CABIN, YOU SEXY BITCH!"...haha, now thats buddy love:D
I want more! lol. I fucking love this story! and seriously, a Manson cameo------->love that! MORE PLEASE!

Loved it

Oh my goodness. Moves like Jagger is my favorite popular song. I want to know what's up with Roxanne and why she's with Adler. Jacob is probably confused as to why she's with men that are so much older. I hope he doesn't think poorly of her. Update as soon as possible.

Lol, Nikki's almost coming across like a desperate fangirl :p
and Zacky just came across as a horny bastard.

I had to laugh at Slash taking the piss out of her because Nikki's trying so hard to get into her pants

I won't," Myles chimed in. "If you feed me, I'll just keep hanging around. I'm like a stray." I love him already - he's so skinny he needs a good feed

@ SabbyHasAHeart

I'm going to respond to your comment here for everyone's benefit: Jacob is actually a really nice and decent guy. Heather (Vixyn Of Shadows) can back me up. He probably honestly wouldn't be totally entranced by the dancing girls. lol. Aaaaaand....thank you for your comments <3

Fuck this is refreshingly awesome already!!! I love Slash in this:D I find it so awesome that there are so many different characters already!! and AHAHAH Nikki, he needs to take a hint. Love it.!!! and I gotta say, Im liking this Jacob already!

My question is how could Jacob walk away from two girls dancing like belly dancers and strippers? He is obviously a very nice nd decent gentleman. I honestly have no idea what's going to happen but that usually happens with you. I leave you to the comtrols. I'm just here for the ride. :D

Loved it

I love how you put so much detail into the characters, like including people they would hang around in real life. Only one of many great qualities for this story ;) please update now please !! Hahaha

Oh my god. I loved the latest chapter lmao. from them going to the club and Desi claiming everyone was boring to Myles scaring the hell out of Rox and calling himself a stray at the mention of good food haha. can't wait for more.