To Be Alone With You - Comments

Beautiful writing <3

Wow this is so good, You are so talented ! Please write more stories for people to read because this one is amazing

AHHHHHHHHHH that chapter was cray cray :P Just make her and John love each other again and make them get married and have babies. I like Kennedy in this story but then I don't at the same time.. he's standing in the way of all the John love that needs to happen :P Great update cant wait for your next one :)

What a sweet chapter aw aw awwww :') but I think I missed it...did they, or didn't they? I can't tell!! Great chapter!!! Keep it up :) x

Your writing is so incredibly flawless, I am so envious. You know how to add in just enough detail to make it feel so human and real.
I'm usually far less sporadic about my commenting but I'm just in a heap of stress trying the finish this damn semester and I miss updates and then realize after I read one update that I never read the previous one. Sigh. I'm sorry nonetheless.
I just feel so bad for Kenny right now. I mean, I can certainly understand why she's so torn, but at the same time, Kennedy's got no idea how she's being tugged away from him. It's driving me nuts. She's so good at burying her stuff and he just has no idea. I can't wait for it to come full circle. I can also completely understand her weakness for John, because really, who doesn't have a weakness for John? ;) ;) but we keep that on the hushhush because I'm 100% a Kennedy girl mostly.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope she explains what's going on to poor Kenny. I'm pretty sure I'm your only reader who's still Team Kennedy.
This chapter is my favorite so far. I'm glad you put extra detail in showing how much she enjoys being with Kennedy. She's not stringing him along or anything. She's honestly divided.

Team John! I read your whole story in a day, and its sooo well written that it captivated me for that long to read it all. I can not wait to read some more and finally know some of the questions John's been yearning for.

Oh boy. That was sorta shit move on her part to just leave him but then again I'd probably do the same thing if I was making out with a guy and suddenly seeing my ex. Loved it, update soon!

Ouch. She just ditched him.
Sounds like someone is gonna have to make a decision soon... :/

lovin' it!

I really liked how the flashback was talked about in the present part. It was a good different than you normally do (not that I don't love what you always do.) okay, I'd give a more thought out opinion but I'm half asleep. As always loved it, update soon!

I would totally love love love for this to be updated like today... I don't think I can handle another week with this cliffhanger you've left for us :P Gracias and update this perf story soon :)

OH THE CLIFFHANGERS YOU LEAVE!!!! keeps me coming back to read more!!! (not like it's not interesting to begin with...because it totally is :) ) can't wait to FINALLY find out what the heck happened between them!!!

WHAT. WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT-WHAT EVEN

Noooooooo. Poor Kennedy, kid's gonna cry himself to sleep when he finds out.
I love the mother / daughter dynamic. So true too and so beautifully written!

This is by far my favourite chapter :) I'm confused though.. are Joss and Kennedy actually in a relationship or what? :P I just want there to be lots more John love. I am expecting the next chapter to be just as amazing as all the others. I cant wait for it :) Thanks for updating, you're the best :P

I love that chapter. My favorite. Love it.

Oh lord. I'm so ecstatic that they're going to get a fresh start, but my oh my is Kennedy going to have a hay day when he finds out. Also, the whole mom scene was so precious, you really did a good thing with how motherly like she was because I feel like the loving mothers are always quick to let you back on no matter what you did because you'll always be their daughter to them and that was just super cute.

I am in love with this story, update soon!

Kennedy is being extremely stubborn...he doesn't even know about John/Josselyn's past yet is acting like he does. Kennedy really needs to talk to John about everything before jumping in and trying to be in a relationship with Josselyn.

Oh god, this story is brilliant. I love it.

Shit's getting intense!