February 4th, 2013 at 09:32pm
True Love - Comments
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This was so amazing!! I seriously started tearing up a bit:)February 4th, 2013 at 09:29pm
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I love where this story is going! Can't wait to find out what happens next :)February 3rd, 2013 at 09:28pm
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I've just found this and I'm now up to date. I love it. It's really addictive. I can't wait to find out what happens next. Please update again soon xxFebruary 3rd, 2013 at 03:31pm
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I'm kind of addicted to this story; can't wait to see what happens next!!February 3rd, 2013 at 04:30am
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oh my god "sausage jockey". Never heard that before but that is absolute gold lol
Oh man having Chance just show up is gonna hurt Zacky as he's probably gonna think that Mia was planning to have him there.
I can see a shit tonne of drama coming :-(February 3rd, 2013 at 01:39am -
Oh, NO! Zacky is gonna be crushed..February 3rd, 2013 at 12:38am
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A filler chapter maybe, but it brought into focus a lot of important points.
Firstly, it showed that Mia can always rely on her father and her sister. And this is a good thing.
Second, it showed that there is hope for her and Zacky, even if nobody else believes it at this point.
Third, Chance is going to mean some serious drama. Especially since Mia is still in love with him.
So much going on, I just can't wait to see where you'll take it.February 3rd, 2013 at 12:21am -
Oh yeah! Love the ending. Chance who?February 1st, 2013 at 07:29am
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Ahhh! This is perfect! I'm actually quite surprised at the ending, and how that will play out in the future with Chance and everything! Can't wait for the next one!!February 1st, 2013 at 01:43am
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More! Can't wait for the next update!February 1st, 2013 at 01:12am
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I liked this chapter. It got a lot of things out of the way and Zacky is finally getting to know the girls, so that's a plus.
The ending kind of surprised me, but I like that it could be the introduction to some serious drama. ;)January 31st, 2013 at 11:50pm -
I was kinda expecting Zacky to get a lot more stroppy with her, but I think how it turned out was great. If he'd gone off at her in front of the girls it would just make them hate him before they got a chance to know him.January 23rd, 2013 at 02:56am
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I don't know what sort of reaction I was expecting from Zacky - more shock? maybe a lot of anger? - but this worked out perfectly. I can't wait to see him get to know the girls more. =) And then I can't wait until they find out!January 23rd, 2013 at 12:53am
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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! So excited for the update o:January 16th, 2013 at 04:01am
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i love it. I knew that Zacky would have a fit thinking that she was pregnant to someone else, but now he's put two and two together. Can't blame him for having a bit of a freak out.
Can't wait to see what happens at the beach as I think it's going to get very interesting :-)January 16th, 2013 at 02:17am -
Love this update.January 16th, 2013 at 01:04am
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I hadn't planned on reading anything new this morning, as I was more in a writing mood, but I was checking the comment swap feature just before and the cover photo from this story caught my eye. Zacky V. Oh, how I love me some Zacky. So I clicked through to see if maybe the story would catch my interest.
And it did, for several reasons. Firstly, because it was a father/child story. Secondly, because it involved twins. And thirdly, because it sounded a whole lot like my current work in progress, Lost. So I decided to give it a read, because I always love to see different takes on the same sorts of ideas.
I fell in love with this story very quickly. I love the drama, I love the awkwardness that is most definitely coming, and I love that you were able to put an original spin on what tends to become a very cliché story. I find that a lot of people can't do that - you've most definitely achieved it!
I also love the fact that Emma and Kenzie already have somebody they consider to be their father, and that his relationship with them is strong. It makes me seriously wonder what's going to happen when (if) they find out about Zacky. Especially being at such an age!
Definitely subscribing to this one. =) I can't wait to see more of it.January 16th, 2013 at 12:41am -
I'm excited for this interaction!!January 8th, 2013 at 07:30am
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Love iiit! =DJanuary 8th, 2013 at 06:00am
I literally said, "Awww..." and put my hands to my fluttering heart. That. Was. ADORABLE.
This chapter was brilliant. It makes me wish Chance didn't exist, but I like that he's there, drama lingering on the outskirts.
Ah, this story is just so beautiful.