A Hero Can Save Us - Comments

I only say that with encouragement and support. Just a few words need fixed not the whole amazingly awesome story!

Go back through and re-read. There is some minor corrections to fulfill.

There is so much great creativity and beautiful imagination. I am super impressed with this writing. I know, I am your best friend. Abes, this is brilliant work that has made me complete for what you love to do. It was diffently worth making a account for this website just to always be able to read your beautiful work. I have always enjoyed reading your writing but this is the beginning of such imaginable, creative, hard-working, and exciting of such a master piece in the making. Continue to write, please. I thirst for more!

Just reading this has made me full of so much emotion and made me want to continuously and contiguously read. I love the first chapter beginning to read the second. :)