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  • Oceanid.

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    /noises of joy

    They're alive! You know what this means? /sings BIGBANG is still alive! While I'm overjoyed that Daesung is alive and that he and Hyun Ae have been reunited, I must admit I found myself near tears while reading G-dragon's reaction when he finally realized that he was truly only a stand-in for Daesung. The bit about how Hyun Ae was ready to forget him entirely is what saddens me the most. That being said, while I am sad to see the GYUN ship sink, I am really happy to see the Aesung ship sailing once more. I'm also very, very happy that TOP is alive and well. Because as much as I love Seungri, I really think GD needs his righthand man a little more right now.

    And they finally have help! Australia deserves all the hugs right now. ALL OF THEM. Hopefully this means they'll be able to take down Doh-Chang once and for all. Also, go Daesung for trying to get Taeyang! part of me wishes TOP would've just let Daesung strangle him, but oh well.

    Oh and did I mention that this chapter is perfectly named? Because not only are two characters back from the dead, but BIGBANG itself has also been resurrected with the help from Australia.
    April 26th, 2013 at 04:54pm
  • Blue to help me fall

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    Oh that was beautiful! (I'm glad Sara inspired you) you can feel the sadness in both of them. They need each other to help them cope, and maybe again to love.
    April 10th, 2013 at 01:21am
  • Oceanid.

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    Cry I want to ship GYUN so bad but it's so heartbreaking! It's sweet that they've found a way to support eachother in the dark time that's befallen BIGBANG and the rest of the world, though. Btw, I'm still secretly holding out hope that TOP and Daesung are just wandering around somewhere with amnesia or something...

    Oh, and that whole scene between GD and Hyun Ae? Not only was it beautiful, but I got to see the couple I ship together actually well... Naughty (that's what that particular part seemed to imply anyway)
    April 9th, 2013 at 10:05pm
  • renai.

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    Why do I even write anymore? This was beautiful and the emotion and just the asdfgjkl;. STAHP.
    April 9th, 2013 at 03:11am
  • kapachii

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    ;; I just read all of this today. It's so beautiful, I love how you're not afraid to go that extra mile and actually cause us heartache. Even though my two favorite members of BIGBANG are M.I.A right now, I hope they'll return... and poor Dae. Thank you for posting this, please update soon!
    April 5th, 2013 at 01:57am
  • Blue to help me fall

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    It is so easy to feel the desolation GD must feel, everything he hoped for seems gone, he tried so hard and now he thinks he has failed. And Hyun Ae, came from despair to hope, purpose and even love and all of it was taken away too.
    It is so lovely that they can find comfort in each other, even though they both know it's not how they would have hoped. They need the strength they can help each other find again.
    It was lovely to see Hyun Ae's reaction to Seungri as well, part of her old feistiness is still there, I can imagine her getting mad at him and the look on his face. It's good that she still has the determination that helped her survive in the first place.
    It is hard to see how Bigbang can carry on with so many gone and food running out, but I know you have ideas up your sleeve!
    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    April 2nd, 2013 at 03:46am
  • honeyjoons

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    I really liked the part where Seungri was trying to help her to fight now that her eyesight was poor. The whole scene was my favorite part and I don't even know what, haha.
    Not even gonna lie, I let out a small little fangirl like squeak when they kissed! I mean, I am still clinging onto those long gone DaesungxHyun Ae ship feels, but I also don't disapprove of she and GD. It's obvious he'd protect her with all he could and that he cares about her a lot and loves her, so it's probably a good thing, especially considering where everyone is emotionally with everything that's happening.
    Speaking of that though, I so hope that something can be done to help BigBang! Unsure
    March 31st, 2013 at 09:04am
  • Blue to help me fall

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    Oh wow, what a hugely emotional chapter! So sad to imagine the memorial with all the names, I could feel Hyun Ae's sorrow and her decision to try to end her life while awful was so understandable, I am so glad GD found her before she could do it. Telling her what Daesung would have wanted was so moving. He wouldn't have fought for her if he wanted her to give up, he loved her spirit and her strength. She needs to go on to honour his memory now.
    Poor GD too, such a huge weight on his shoulders, the fate of all the followers of BigBang plus his love for a woman who is so desperately broken and who loved another.
    It was lovely to see Yeon Hee again, her devotion to Hyun Ae was beautiful, helping the person who showed the first kindness to her.
    While I am looking forward to seeing how the story goes, when you said it may be finished in about 10 chapters I want to say No! I don't want it to end at all! You write so very well and I enjoy the story with the guys of BigBang so much.
    March 14th, 2013 at 12:12pm
  • Oceanid.

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    Yeon Hee helping Hyun Ae is so sweet; the fact that it was done without even being asked makes it all the more touching. The bit about the name engravings for those they lost breaks my heart. It's a lovely gesture and memorial, but at the same time it's still heartbreaking. Hyun Ae... I'm glad Yeon Hee and GD were able to find her before she could hurt herself in a manner that would be unrepairable. I'm saddened that she felt felt she couldn't go on, though it is understandable with all she's been through.

    The fact that GD mentioned that Daesung would have wanted her to live is also rather saddening. Partially because Daesung is dead, or thought to be at least, and also because I'm just thinking on how much it must have hurt GD to say that. He knows Daesung had feelings for her and now that Hyun Ae returned them. I marvel at how he managed to get the message across when it had to hurt knowing on some level that he's merely a stand-in for the person who is no longer there. As for the end of this chapter: I'm glad GD is able to provide a least a hint of comfort & safety for Hyun Ae, I'm just not sure that it'll be enough for either of them. Or of the toll it will take on him, trying so hard to keep someone alive who doesn't seem to see the point anymore.
    March 14th, 2013 at 12:41am
  • Rev. Micki Plague

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    It went from as happy as they could be to despair so quickly. You write so well, the emotion shines straight through in abundance. I really feel for them all, especially GD with his world falling down around him.
    March 8th, 2013 at 08:12pm
  • Blue to help me fall

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    Oh I'm so glad you updated, I've been checking every day. So awful to see what GD's going through, his emotion is so raw. The way he must feel about Taeyang and his betrayal, the shock of finding out about Daesung and now the possible loss of TOP and the fact Hyun Ae can't see. How much can he bear??
    I hope Hyun Ae's vision is just temporary, that with time her sight will heal, and that somehow TOP has survived. Strong as GD and Seungri are, they need him, to help save everyone.
    Great chapter, even though it was short. You have me on the edge of my seat!
    March 8th, 2013 at 09:49am
  • Oceanid.

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    My heart is breaking over here. I feel for GD, he's trying so hard to be the strong & confident leader the people need... The fact that we get to see GD panic a little reminds me that he's human and he feels pain, sorrow, and anguish just like everyone else. And Hyun Ae... I suppose the upside is that at least there's color even if it doesn't do her much good now. Hopefully her vision will return, if not I imagine it'll be hard for her to adjust. I really hope T.O.P. is alive somewhere and that Daesung is hopefully alive too. I just... don't want to accept that he's dead. When it comes to Taeyang, my feelings are mixed. Part if me says there had to be a reason, but another larger part of me can't get over how he betrayed the people who trusted him and the way he treated Hyun Ae.

    Also, GD's thoughts on his attraction to Hyun Ae have me spazzing. Yes, I still ship G-YUN.
    March 8th, 2013 at 12:45am
  • MentalCriminal

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    T.O.P isn't dead is he? Noooo Binguuuu </3
    March 7th, 2013 at 11:52pm
  • honeyjoons

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    OMG. I had a little bit of a feeling that GD had some feelings for her but I didn't know they were that intense! Poor guy. My poor reader heart is so sad because of Hyun Ae and then GD and then dead T.O.P ugh my emotions, man.
    March 7th, 2013 at 08:25am
  • renai.

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    T.O.P. isn't dead, you meanie.

    Really lovely update though. I adored the emotions by GD and all that. Really lovely.
    March 7th, 2013 at 05:09am
  • Selestyna Arpa364

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    OMG MY FEELS ARE DESTROYED!!!! This is such a crazy story. Most of the time I hate post-apocalypse things but you my friend made it thrilling. Hats off to you!
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:04am
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    OMG MY FEELS ARE DESTROYED!!!! This is such a crazy story. Most of the time I hate post-apocalypse things but you my friend made it thrilling. Hats off to you!
    March 2nd, 2013 at 01:04am
  • honeyjoons

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    Omg her sister is alive! That makes me happy but also not at all because the poor girl probably had to go through hell. But yay omg T.O.P!! This gives me hope that GD isn't dead either...well I hope not. I can't wait for the next update! Also, part of me hopes they were able to save her sisters...
    February 26th, 2013 at 08:52pm
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    T.O.P FEELSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS. OMG. Hyun Ae was amazing in this, though. Standing up to that prick. I hope he's fucking dead soon for what he did to her.
    February 22nd, 2013 at 02:33am
  • Oceanid.

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    I'm glad Hyun Ae was able to try to stand up to Doh-Chang, even if things took a turn for the worse. I'd still like someone to look him in a room somewhere and send those Jug-em in there to eat him. I'm glad she was rescued and that TOP's alive! I was concerned with where the story left him, bleeding and waiting for more soliders to come his way but he (obviously) survived, so yay! I wonder if we'll see any of the others?

    Also, if I can be of any help just PM me okay?
    February 22nd, 2013 at 02:19am