Wretches & Kings - Comments

Oh brilliant!!
YAY!!
I knew something had to happen!
Poor Hyun Ae, what terrible things to have to live through but her strength sustained her ad I love that she still tried to fight, despite the risk & how it ended.
I knew he'd be there again :)
can't keep a good man down lol
As to where the story goes, you can follow her recovery, explain what happened, Taeyang's role, who's left, what they did in the time that passed,where do they go now, planning they do, how do they feel about what has happened, then there has to be more conflict.
I am sure you will feel the story coming to you as you write. I usually find ideas come but it's only when I start writing that it becomes really clear and fills out.

My heart aches for Hyun Ae. I'm glad she's able to resist, at least to some degree, but can't help feeling overwhelmingly sad over what's being done to her. As for Doh-Chang, I feel nothing but hatred for him. How someone can be so cruel and somehow still be considered a savior is beyond me. I must say, however, that I did find a teensy bit of humor in Hyun Ae's remark about the drapes. I don't want Hyun Ae to die, don't get me wrong, but imagining Doh-Chang's reaction in finding out his 'pet' had manged to die with the use of the drapes is too amusing. (Feel free to think I have a bad sense of humor, I don't mind)

I'm glad that Hyun Ae has found one of her siblings at least and can find at least a bit of happiness in that. I just hope that the others can come to her rescue.

Wow her sister is still alive! That must give her some hope and the new strength to try to overcome Doh-Chan. I like others want to hope somehow Daesung isn't dead, and somehow Taeyang isn't a traitor, somehow TOP is still out there ready to attack,somehow that Seungri and GD will ride in like knights to save everyone, but I know all that may not happen. But I am very much enjoying the way the story is unfolding, even if it has tragedy. It gives the story much more power to see characters not always fixing every problem, to be able to make your readers feel strong emotion is a great skill.

I HATE WHAT YOU DO TO ME.

Oh my, I'm in tears. Daesungiiieee ;_;

Oh no... Hyun Ae... I got this sinking feeling as soon as the woman came in and started 'prepariing' her. I can't believe people look up to this Doh-Chang as a savior. He's no savior. He's a horrible, heartless, pathetic excuse for a ruler and a man. And Taeyang! The pure rage I felt when it was revealed that he was the traitor! I was actually hoping that one of Doh-Chang's monsters would eat him or at least injure him. Sadly, neither of those happened. Now when it comes to the part with Daesung... I could feel my heart breaking. Breaking for Daesung when he realized why she was allowed to see him, for Hyun Ae when she sees what they'd done to him, and for the both of them when she was dragged away. I sincerely hope that by some miracle, Daesung will be alive and will find a way to rescue Hyun Ae. As I reached the end the chapter, I found myself wanting something, anything to happen to stop Doh-Chang from he's about to do.

I wonder, if the bleeding Hyun Ae is suffering is because of her attempts to resist Doh-Chang's commands and to resist the drugs in her system... If that is the case, I hope Hyun Ae continues to fight and if she ends up dying as a result, at least that would be a better fate than being Doh-Chang's special slave.

Taeyang...he had a plan, right? He was lying about being a traitor, right? Maybe he was tricked. Maybe he was threatened? Cuz NO HE CAN'T BE A TRAITOR!!

And oh no...Hyun Ae... nonononono......i felt like I was the one that was drugged, unable to do anything to help or anything as I read on. And Daesung... poor poor Daesung.
But seriousdly, he can't be dead. Body or it didn't happen.

---that wasn't a challenge. Please let him still be alive. TT_TT

I wish I could write something as cool and action-y as this. The latest chapter was intense. I really loved it, even if it was depressing. I know Daesung isn't dead, so. Don't even with me if he's not. Just. No.

Oh my gosh my soul it weeps. Between betrayal by Taeyang and Daesung I just...ouch. Plus poor Hyun Ae. I just don't know what to do with myself.

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

:`(
Oh the betrayal - that's so awful, the outcome - so sad
*sob*

Omg I've been putting off reading my subscriptions because of pure laziness but holy barnacles I've missed some things. First off, I was really excited when Daesung kissed her and said he loved her. I just breathed a breath of relief and was like "FINALLY." I was also really happy that Hyunto Ae got have fun. AND THEN LET'S TALK ABOUT BADASS HYUN AE AND THE DAEKU-JON. The fight scene was great omg. I'm proud of her for fighting back but NOW SHE'S CAPTURED AND I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHERE THE GUYS ARE AND WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN TO HER AND OMG I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON.

I am speechless.....

I feel punched to the gut like Hyun Ae was!

So intense and so scary.
Did GD get out? And Seungri?
What of TOP he was obviously hurt badly
Daesung is caught as well and where is Taeyang?
And why do they want Hyun Ae so badly. What is it about her that makes her so important.
Please don't keep us in suspense too long.

Um... wow. Hyun Ae's certainly proved she's not one to mess with. She's also proved she's very smart, as she looked around for a weapon and in using the stool on the infirmary proved that anything can be used as a weapon to defend yourself with. Gah! I thought for sure Seungri was going to die. T_T But then TOP stepped in and saved him... and now it seems like TOP's going to die. I really want to know how the Dakeu-Jeon got in there without detection... My first thought is that they had someone inside feeding them information, which makes me think of TOP, but that doesn't make a lot of sense because he's concerned about GD... Poor Hyun Ae, I really hope they're talking about some other woman and not her, but I get the feeling it's Hyun Ae they're refering to.

Hopefully this means BigBang to the rescue?

GAAAAHHHH!!! IDK WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF!!

Good for Hyun Ae for going ape shit on them!! BUT NOO SHE GOT CAUGHT!! And Daesung...Oh no, Daesung...GAHH!!

This was such an epic chapter...I greedily want more!!

Aw, Hyun Ae's very sweet in telling Daesung to give her a little time and the kiss! :D It's just too cute. TOP was nice?! I'm shocked, but maybe he isn't such a bady guy after all... Goodness as for the ending- Now I really want to know what happens next! I just hope everyone will survive and that BigBang won't loose anyone.

Poor Hyun Ae she's so worried about her feelings but at least she's given Daesung some hope, he's so sweet and kind.
It was all so nice, even TOP wasn't horrid then OMG!!!!!!!!WTF!!!!!!!
What on earth is going to happen now!!??

ps. How do you put a photo into a comment?

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GAH!! This chapter!! Gaaaaahhhhh!!! I can't, too much excitement!! OH NOS WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN?! IDUNNO WHAT TO DO WITH MYSELF GAWD!!!

...Gosh, what do you do to me?!?! Right when things get good...Please, let no one get hurt!! >_<

You are really good for giving my ship feelings that I certainly did not have at the beginning. Like, at first, I was all there won't be a Aesung moment when I really wanted one (oh, yes, ho ho ho; I hate you for this~). But then there kind of was one.



AND T.O.P. Asdghjkl;. LIKE, WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO MY OVARIES? HE IS JUST



Still kind of serious about the poor tongueless girl making a reappearance. Idek. I have a soft spot for handicapped characters.

And, so, I was enjoying my romance and THEN YOU JUST HAD TO COCKBLOCK.




I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS.

I CRY.

oh how wonderful! Poor Daesung, drinking to get courage then mucking it all up. Hyun Ae feels it too but she's so unsure.
GD is a bit too pushy, I'm glad the girls took him before he pressured her any more.
Taeyang is lovely, I'm happy that he was able to get Hyun Ae to relax and enjoy the night. It was just what she needed. I like the idea she'd never heard music before.
Seungri drunk is so funny, he's a great character. I can just picture his antics.
Wonder how Daesung will feel after he wakes up and if her remembers what he did.
I did miss that TOP didn't turn up though, but I'm just biased that way lol

GAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!! DA KISS!! XD
Already this was an EPIC update, gosh, GAAAHH! THEY KISSED!!

But yea...too bad he was drunk. And probably guilty as all hell or doesn't remember. Please Hyun Ae, be gentle with him. XD

I am really hoping it works out for these two, really. I feel bad for GD for some reason though. =/ I just want everyone to be happy...

Seungri being the laughing drunk made me giggle. He would be like that, gosh.

Your update totally made my long night. THANKS FOR BEING AWESOME!!