Wretches & Kings - Comments

I love how I knew it was Taeyang, the moment you mentioned his gravity-defying hair. I was like "That can only be one fabulous man...XD"

Also, is it bad that around the same time I was thinking "Oh hey...for once he's wearing something on top. Like he actually has sleeves to push up." =P

HAHAHAHA, I didn't mind this chapter. It was a brief show of Taeyang, but I love his job.
I mean, look at him. He's just that epic. XD




Hahaha, but I think this update was great. =D I'm sure even Taeyang approves!:


Yes...yes he does. XD

Wow, this is amazing. Like, your descriptions are flawless and your writing itself is brilliant. I love how you're introducing each character at a time and not throwing too much information at the readers at one time. My heart breaks for Hyun Ae but I really love her character. I also really enjoy how you introduced GD. He was so comforting and nice. Also Daesung is perf, BLESS his soul. I'm really excited this story has him with his blonde hair because I love his blonde hair

But I just love this and I can't wait to see more Seungri and Taeyang and I really can't wait for T.O.P

I think it was a good chapter. Your introduction of GD was great, the humour along with the seriousness. His description was good too, the expressions of everyone makes it easy to picture the scene. Seungri was in interesting character, obviously so used to his role that he's unaware of how he might come across to someone new, and his relationship with Daesung was so easy and friendly. It's good to see Hyun Ae healing, I loved the bit with the dog, shows her humanity is still there despite her fear. Can't wait to see who we get to meet next.

I like how Daesung emphasized how he'd only take her to see GD when she was ready and not a moment sooner. It's very sweet and a nice quality for him to have. I <3 the teensy inclusion of Seungri in this chapter. I seriously had to work to keep my laughter to a minimal level because of the combination of Seungri's seemingly completely-oblivious-to-the-fact-that-I'm-scaring-this-girl-within-an-inch-of-her-life greeting & his conversation with Deasung. I really hope we'll get to see more interaction from those two because they seriously crack me up. GD was perfect. I like how he was very polite and was willing to share his story with someone he just met. I look forward to more of this!

BEGIN ZEE SPAMMAGE!!! XD

OH OH OH OH!! GD!!!! =D

Man, I think you just keep on nailing these chapters...The way you described GD was just...gah! It's so GD that I can't get over it. XD


~You said it, GD; this is indeed "WOW, FANTASTIC BABY!!"

And I really have to love Daesung; he is soo nurturing that it's just so sweet! I wonder...is this Daesung afraid of ghosts?? =P

Though we only saw a little bit of this


I'm expecting something like this

...when he does come out for realzzz...

OMOMOMOMOMOMOMOMO!! I SERIOUSLY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!! XD

oooh now we start to meet the characters and find out more about the life she has had with the Dakeu Jeon-won.
I really like that you have the band in a completely new situation, not them just being themselves. You can still see Daesung's character shine through, he's a good choice for healer.

My heart is breaking for the slaves and what Hyun Ae went through as one. The fact that BigBang is a legend, something many like to think exist but don't know for sure. Something they cling to for hope... it makes me even sadder for the characters as it paints a picture of how desperate these people are. Daesung's appearance, however, lessens my saddness. The fact that he doesn't seem too fazed by Hyun Ae's response combined with his comment on her being free to leave if she wishes shows that he has a very caring personality. I look forward to seeing more of Daesung, Hyun Ae, and the eventual appearance of the others!

Ok I never usually comment on stories this much but akghdalgh I was so happy when I saw there was an update! x3 And it lived up to my expectations. Everything is just so well thought out and again I love that its not like...a typicall fanfic and that you put them into different characters. Oh and your descriptions are amazing~ I knew right away it was Daesung as soon as you said you couldn't see his eyes when he smiled LOL Thank you for the update and can't wait for more^^

Whenever I see updates, I just get sooo...

...almost as excited as Daesung is to be the first one to be out. XD

Alright, alright...I get even more excited. =P Like this update made me soo happy! Can I just say that you did an amazing job with this chapter? I mean, I could hear Daesung's bright voice as he talked to the girl...in Korean, and in my head there were subtitles...O_O
Regardless, this makes me so happy. I celebrated like


...oh gosh...I can't wait for more!! XD

Sounds really good, looking forward to what happens next

OH MI GOSH

i love so much <3

Oh my gawd, I need more.
I haven't seen any recent or good Big Bang fanfics and this is already amazing and the boys haven't even shown up yet :x and I LOVE Big Bang. I also love that it's putting them into a different character rather than just singers as we already know them. And can I just say the roles you gave them fit perfectly? T.O.P is my bias and I can definitely see him as a killer and GD as leader...well it's a given :x I love the theme of the story, it seems rather dark and I like that. And I'm hoping maybe there's a teeeeny bit of romance..? :x Anyways, I love all your kpop stories so much thank you for all of them and I can't wait for more ♥

Can I have the secrets to your awesomeness? Please? No? Okay then, on with the comment. Holy cow, you have written an amazing, attention-grabbing chapter. The Jug-ems are already a terrifying idea and I can picture them rather clearly in my mind. I imagine them as large wolves that clearly had some... issues in breeding or in an enviormental situation. And the soldiers, dear god the soldiers. They're terrifying as well, not as much in the coming after people aspect, but in what the possibilities of what they do to escapees and where they take them. Poor Hyun Ae... I'm glad she was able to escape the soldiers and the Jug-em, but find myself slightly leery of the woman. As a reader, I don't know if the older woman is just helping her or if she has an hidden motive...

Either way, you're off to a great start and I look forward to more.

SO when I was told that this was out, I was totally like

~I RUSHED OVER HERE!! XD

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG I CAN'T. I JUST OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG CONTAINMENT OF MY EXCITEMENT IS FUTILE!!! XD



OKAY, I'm done! I'm relaxed...I'm okay...
---But I HAVE NO IDEA WHERE TO BEGIN ON ALL THIS AWESOMENESS!!!



OHHHHHHHHHH....okay, I'm sorry, I was being obnoxious. XD
I love this already! I also love that you have Keep Your Head Down in your playlist; it's actually one of the few songs I really like by the pair.
Anyways, your story...I've already over-used the word amazing so I have no idea what else I can say that would do your work justice. O_O. You, lady, are toooooo good!! The details are amazing! Literally I was like "COME ONE HYUN AE PUSH THROUGH!! FIGHT!!!"
And when she got caught, I was like "NOOO SOMEONE STOP THIS AND SAVE HER!!"
I kinda like that you didn't throw in the guys right away; I also like that I have no ways of predicting what is going to happen in the story. The scenes I was able to picture EVERYTHING like it was a movie...man, I'm looking forward for more!

I'm so curious to know what is going to happen next; I can't wait!!!!!! TOTALLY SUBBING CUZ THIS IS FANTASTIC BABY!!

Oh, oh. You thanked me. :D This is soooo awesome. WHEN WILL I SEE SOME T.O.P. DESCRIPTION? Lol, I don't care. I really can't wait to see more of Hyun Ae. I feel like she'll be a determined character. She'll cry a lot more, but I think she'll be strong in her very own (awesome) way. I just sayin'. I can't wait for more amazing-ness from you~.

Omg. I like. So much.