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  • Littleant

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    Wait…wot???
    That's the end??
    February 14th, 2013 at 08:20am
  • M1295

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    It's over?! Please add more. Like a sequel or something!!!
    February 14th, 2013 at 07:26am
  • Kittykat81

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    Really!!!! At least a one shot or two shot equal please they need to be together!!!
    February 14th, 2013 at 06:28am
  • BecauseItsTheCup

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    I absolutely loved this story, you can't end it here! You should write a sequel!
    February 14th, 2013 at 04:56am
  • lost18486936

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    .......um excuse yourself and explain now
    mooooooooore
    soooo good.
    February 14th, 2013 at 03:42am
  • Tragic_Ending

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    you can't just leave it there! I need more!
    February 14th, 2013 at 02:54am
  • bluesbabyx3

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    update update update!!
    February 4th, 2013 at 05:38am
  • bublbabie

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    That little mark looks like an out for him if she isn't really his but will Emma take him back? I don't know what I would do if I was her. This is a crazy situation. Would she be able to ever trust him again?
    January 30th, 2013 at 05:22am
  • bluesbabyx3

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    love this story! update sooooon! :)
    January 29th, 2013 at 08:44am
  • Hockey_fan74

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    Update sooooooooon please! :)
    January 27th, 2013 at 09:36pm
  • poorsadpoofy

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    I agree with everyone. Missed this and missed youuuuuu bby! ♥ update spoon.
    January 15th, 2013 at 02:37am
  • lost18486936

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    this bitch here....(i mean kayla)
    i dislike her.
    and this roger dude.
    and i hope that he is the father so tj leaves
    and then there can be cute emma and tj reuniting going on.
    amazing as usual
    January 14th, 2013 at 03:51am
  • penschick8771

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    I feel that Roger is more like the father and not the god father
    loved the update :)
    please update soon :)
    January 13th, 2013 at 07:28am
  • Red The Small

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    Roger is definitely more than just a friend.. I can feel it! I really hope that TJ and Emma get together in the enddd :(
    Great chapter! :)
    January 13th, 2013 at 04:56am
  • lovergirl5036

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    Okay, time to put my money on that this Roger character is Victoria's dad, or at least TJ has some inkling to this. He should with the whole birthmarks thing, or else someone really needs to give him a clue. But the more I read the more I can see that the happy family TJ wants isn't with Kayla or Victoria (who, at this point, I think would have more shock value being TJ's kid then not), but instead with Luca and Emma with the potential of one or two more (depending on Victoria's paternity). I think the idea that Jon is more of a dad to Luca then TJ is/will be the catalyst for him to realize that he's not been giving his all to Luca (no matter how much he tries to deny it). Honestly at this point it's time to cut the chord and tell Kayla he seems to love her more as a casual sex buddy/ stress reliever then as a wife compared to his love for Emma. Because while I'm still insanely pissed TJ cheated on Emma like an asshole, my money is on Kayla cheating with this Roger guy (and conceiving Victoria) and I don't think TJ wants a wife who will not only be his mistress but doesn't mind being an adulteress as well.
    January 13th, 2013 at 12:56am
  • lovergirl5036

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    January 13th, 2013 at 12:56am
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    January 13th, 2013 at 12:56am
  • coyle;

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    ....I'm getting a little scared, haha. Love the update!
    January 12th, 2013 at 10:13pm
  • penschick8771

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    I love this story
    Hopefully TJ's mom will be able to knock some sense into him :)
    January 10th, 2013 at 04:50pm
  • coyle;

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    I love this story so much! I feel like punching TJ in the face sometimes ya know. I love that you do flashbacks so we can unserstand the story even more. Gahh, one of my favorites. Please update soon! And I'm almost certain the baby isn't his. Since that Kayla chick slept around a lot. And I legit started crying at one point. Perfect.
    January 6th, 2013 at 07:17am
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