Dark Paradise - Comments

Oh man, I love this! Lucia's so adorable and I feel so bad for him an how he must be feeling when TJ isn't there but he has the best godparents ever! I love this and I teared up quite a few times. Hope you update soon!

love this story so much :)
I have a feeling the baby isn't really his...
hopefully Teej and Emma will be able to talk soon

ahhh!!!! i love love love love this!!!
moooore now please
so...im hoping you explain this sh*t about the mark thing. like soon :P

EEEEEEK :) This is a great chapter! I wonder what his mother would say!

The dark mark on his daughter neck that seems familiar to him. That makes me wonder if that's his daughter but I could be wrong.

PLEASE update soon! The single best TJ story ever! :)

they need to get back together
hopefully when she goes to STL they can figure things out
loved the update
please update soon :)

oh
my
O_O
whats she gonna do?
but what's he gonna do?

ummm so this was amazing as usual
as for your little authors note comment....
just no.
i cant not have this story anymore...
so i say a 3rd sequel :D
yayayay for updates tho. loveeee this

I just love this story so much :)
I really hope TJ and Emma can get things figured out :)
Kayla has got to go!
please update soon :)

iesjbglskjvnaklbf oh my gosh!
I so wasnt expecting that.
damn.
umm... so kayla should leave like now
and then emma and tj can just get back together
I'm pushing this hardcore right now
moreeee

Ahhh I hope he realizes that needs/wants Emma and Luca back in his life! Great update, I can not wait for more. P.S. Is it bad that I hope/think that the new baby is not his?

Wait, is the biggest mistake of his life leaving Emma and Luca or calling his new wife by the name of his ex-wife, because if it's the latter then I'm more then happy with TJ remaining with Kayla and a kid my gut says isn't his. If it's the former then that whole 'biggest mistake of his life' thing has taken him 5-6 years to realize. If I'm Emma I don't take him back until he proves that this isn't another case of him choosing between her and Luca vs. Kayla and Victoria only to change his mind when it suits him. Also I hope she doesn't let him play Kayla for a fool like he did to her, because no matter how much she dislikes Kayla, she really doesn't deserve this (unless my instinct that Kayla not only cheated but that the baby belong so some other guy i.e. not TJ, then I feel a bit less sympathy). Can't wait to see how this turns out.

ummm....baby toews? I love youuuuuuuu
Like a lottttt.
Like beyond a lot.
And as much as i hate saying this, I think Emma and TJ are meant to beeeee.
I want more!
Please.
Love thissss

OHMYGOSH! Does this mean Q and Jon are having a baby?!?! YAY!! They will be perfect parents. I wish it was more TJ going to her instead of her going to him, but love it anyway! Keep up the great work!

Wait…why was she crying???
I'm seriously attached to this story and I constantly look at my inbox to see if it's been updated
You're a great writer!

YOURE NOT GOING TO TELL US WHAT HAPPENED TO MAKE HER CRY!?!? OH MY GOD.
OKAY, SO... HE'S FINALLY STARTING TO REGRET HIS DECISIONS, IM SO HAPPY

IM SORRY FOR YELLING AT YOU, IM HAVING SO MANY FEELS I CAN'T STOP YELLING

Okay so... um... im feelin this new relationship brewing..
but at the same time i really really really really want tj and emma together... like a lot.
and i loooove this story.
can we have baby toews soon? ur killin me here with jon and luka.
but yeah, this is so so so awesome!!!
so yeah update again :P
like now :P

I really like this concept and the story as a whole. It's a great story. keep up the great work :)

I really like this story and the whole concept of it and the plot is really good. I can't wait to see where you take this from here. I love the characters and I love the situation you've created, well done!