Dark Paradise - Comments

Ugh I hope she finds someone nice and kind and interesting to be with. I want to punch TJ in the face. While it breaks my heart to hear a 4 year old talking about hate it's definitely kind of justified.

i'm fairly certain i've commented before, but since I can't see it anywhere, I will comment (again). I LOVE this story. There aren't many TJ stories, and ones that show the dark side of relationships. He is really irritating, but that's why I am so intrigued by this story. Please update as SOON as possible. Dan Carcillo---not a good match for Emma and Luca. I hope TJ comes to his senses!

AHH!!! i love love love love this beyond belief!
but uh... this guest? better not be tj.
because as jon's fictional wife in this story i will kill him
but this is awesome and you need updateeeeeee

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Oh my goodness. So he can be a decent human being! :o
Loved the update babe! Keep 'em coming! whoot!

OHHHH SNAP.
SHIT GOT REAL.
Seriously love this.
But screa that skanky-hoe-bag-slut-twatwad Kayla.
Just saying.
She needs to go.
Now.
Preferably she needs to step on a landmine or fall in the bathtub and drown because she's stupid.
yeah...i may be taking this hate to literal.
anyways, love love love love love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Also, I love jon in this :D

This is sooo good so far. Nuff said.

Ho-ly crap!!!

I just found this story and I absolutely love it! Please update soon!

I love love love this story! But I totally hate Kayla! And when Jon freaked out upon seeing the baby it kinda made me think that the baby isn't Tj's..? Hope not! That would make it so much easier for him to get back with Emma. I can't wait for more updates!!!

Kind of lost track of updates and commenting on 'Pride' but here I am. I was so excited when you mentioned a sequel because Tj Oshie anything makes me so happy. I love the drama and how it is already unfolding in the two beginning chapters. Can't wait to see what you do with all of this awkwardness. Update ASAP :)

I'm going to be honest: I don't know who any of these people are but I really love the story line. I'll read an update! Wooooo!

"Go jump off a bridge" HAHAHAHAHA yes!!!
omg this was sooo good!!!!
I want more right now.
And i want some cuteness between bb Oshie and papa Oshie pleaseeee.
and as always some hilarious and or awkwardness between teej and emma :D
mooore. love ittt!!!!

This. this. this. this. this! ASAP