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  • asdfghjkl;lkjhgfdsa

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    Pleeeeeeeease update soon!
    April 14th, 2013 at 07:30pm
  • justforyoutonight

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    This chapter! Especially the last part about Noah made me love Charlie and Alex even more. Brilliant job, lady. :)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 08:09pm
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    Another brilliant chapter!;) Alex and Charlie are just soooo adorable:)
    February 23rd, 2013 at 07:02pm
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    I loooove this story! And that last chapter you wrote was amazing:) I'm falling in love with all the characters:') and I hope Charlie and Erica are gonna be really good friends:)
    February 18th, 2013 at 10:15am
  • kmcgeezy

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    No! No writers block! I completely understand though.. Anyways this was a cute chapter! I really hope everything is okay with Jer! I think going to Baltimore will do Charlie some good! Even if she has to bring Noah with her, it will be worth it. And then Charlie and Erica can meet and become best friends! :D Can't wait for the next update and hopefully the evil writers block will stay away!
    February 14th, 2013 at 06:17am
  • justforyoutonight

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    I'm glad my idea helped! You know how much I love this story so yessss. Keep going!! :p ;)<3
    February 12th, 2013 at 08:37pm
  • justforyoutonight

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    PERFECTION for various reasons haha. I feel like if I was Erica, I would've acted the same around Jack's friends. I just hope Lisa isn't up to something?! :o
    February 5th, 2013 at 06:07am
  • kmcgeezy

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    This chapter was so darn cute! I couldn't wipe the smile off my face when Jack was blushing about Erica! Gaaaahhhhh. And Charlie and Alex love each other!! Ahhhhh. Sorry, I am just really in love with this story! :D
    February 4th, 2013 at 06:29pm
  • asdfghjkl;lkjhgfdsa

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    Omg. The feels. This was amazing
    January 30th, 2013 at 07:10pm
  • natttttt

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    love love love
    January 30th, 2013 at 04:37pm
  • justforyoutonight

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    I might or might not have had a tantrum when tony showed up. Oh my god. Jack is literally so perfect and the way he stood up to Tony.. I just can't with this. The chapter was so perfect and haunting.

    I can't wait for more! <3
    January 30th, 2013 at 06:00am
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    This was sad and beautiful...and adorable. I absolutely love this story.
    January 30th, 2013 at 01:55am
  • kmcgeezy

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    The end of this chapter was so cute! I absolutely love Jack and Erica together! I'm glad to finally find out some background info about Erica, too! Tony is an asshole - make him go away! Anyways, can't wait for another update! :)
    January 30th, 2013 at 01:38am
  • ofclumsywords

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    @ kmcgeezy
    Aww thank you so much!! I'm glad you like it!
    January 27th, 2013 at 02:55pm
  • kmcgeezy

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    I absolutely adore this story! Gah, like I can't even explain how much I love it! Update this sucker ASAP! :)
    January 27th, 2013 at 09:55am
  • heeytara

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    The wait was worth it but I still have a teeny tiny urge to throw a large object at you
    January 24th, 2013 at 06:39pm
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    @ upxallxnight
    Please don't throw your phone! Then you won't be able to read the next update right away! But I'm glad you liked it!
    January 23rd, 2013 at 11:17pm
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    @ heeytara
    Hmmm so was the wait worth it then?... Or do you still feel like you need to throw a large object at me!?
    January 23rd, 2013 at 11:15pm
  • justforyoutonight

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    Omfg I was about to throw my phone down when I saw Tony's name! Holy shit haha. Yay can't wait for more! What a cliffhanger! Good job lady:)
    January 23rd, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • heeytara

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    You cant do this to me. I need more.
    January 23rd, 2013 at 08:01pm