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Aaaaahhh I loved it! jack is so adorable! Hehehe :3 this might sound really stupid of me.. But what is RS?

He sighed at his reflection in the mirror before turning the shower on and waiting for the water to heat up. It was going to be harder and harder not to say anything about Erica if he kept falling more and more for her each day.

That paragraph made my heart burst. SO CUTE. I actually love the cute little lovey-dovey writing. It makes me happy, and I love seeing how Jack's walls are coming down. Can't wait for more <3

I read this entire chapter. And the whole time I was thinking that it was SO familiar. Good to know it was a re-write from RS! Haha, I dont feel crazy now. :P

Great job (again) - can't wait for more!

I got mentioned hehehehe;) you are amazing at writing, this is a really really great story. Can't wait for more!

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Aww thank you! It means so much that you like this! <3

You're such an amazing writer! Aahhhh I love this story so so much! And merry Christmas to you too!

Oh hey there! Casually leaving a comment at 1am because you just updated! Haha super good things. And yes, I'm glad we got a bit more info into it.

And whose this Tony fella? Was she ENGAGED BEFORE OR SOMETHING? I can't even right now.

Can't wait to read more!

Xo

Aww I love Jack and Erica for obvious reasons. ;) I love that they're taking it slow but finally talking. They're so cute.

I'm seriously so intrigued by Erica's background and I can't wait to read more!

I can't believe my last comment never posted for chapter 5! :(

But they were both so good! I'm finally starting to see a little more into the two couples and their backgrounds. I can't wait to find out more details about Erica and Jack each, and how their relationship goes. :D

Oh man, the feels I'm having right now are ridiculous. This story is so cute and such a good idea.

I can't wait to see more!! :)

Oh and I'm so glad you had a good time at the yellowcard show!

Aww i adore this already! update when you can please! :)

Oh my god oh my god! You already know how excited I was for this story/chapter. It's SO funny to see how Jack and Erica actually first met. Like that probably won't be what they tell their kids but you know... haha. I loved it!

I can't wait to read more about her past and about how her relationship with Jack goes because that was an interesting first impression lol.

Yay for this story!
Have fun at the yellowcard show and tell Ryan and Sean that I love them! :p And I demand a twitter shoutout. Lol jk ;)

OH and do you have a tumblr?

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Awe this is so cute. I adore this story already. The whole concept of doing a side story to explain other characters' backgrounds is amazing. And you know how ready I am for chapter 3! :D

Have a great thanksgiving, beautiful!

I figured out how to comment on my phone! Oh my god. This is amazing. As soon as I saw I had an email in my gmail account, I freaked out cause I hoped it was this story! AH. I'm so excited! I can't wait to see more.

I'm glad you chose Charlie to be a dancer. I feel like it suits her.

IM SO EXCITED! :D

SUBSCRIIIIIIBED!