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  • steph1984

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    Loved it :D x
    November 27th, 2012 at 05:43pm
  • Fantasy_Reality

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    Great chapter, really enjoyed the update. Can't wait to read more
    November 27th, 2012 at 05:05am
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    @ soupy
    Sometimes I think u know my character better than me! Glad u liked!
    November 27th, 2012 at 04:29am
  • soupy

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    I get that once Kelly got over the initial rush of euphoria - that she got scared. Her head understood why Sid did what he did, but her heart was having a little trouble adjusting. He had really hurt her - and while he had 5 years to adjust to all of this, Kelly had only minutes to go from hating to loving. She really needs something to assure her that he is not going to up and break her heart again.

    The kiss was a great place to start.
    November 27th, 2012 at 04:27am
  • soupy

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    Loved this!!
    November 26th, 2012 at 09:36pm
  • steph1984

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    They've told each other !
    They've said the L word.

    That was perfect :) Please tell me we are in for a kiss from these 2 now.
    November 26th, 2012 at 09:32pm
  • steph1984

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    Just the chapter title is getting me all giddy :)
    gonna read it now
    November 26th, 2012 at 09:25pm
  • steph1984

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    Oh please update this asap. They way he delcared his love for kelly made my heart melt :)

    I cant wait to see wht happens now
    November 26th, 2012 at 03:05pm
  • soupy

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    I loved this! It was so sweet and heartfelt to hear Sid's thoughts throughout the years - and how intertwined Kelly was in these thoughts.

    I think Kelly saw the other side of this - and yes, her response was definitely different than his - but know I think she gets the FULL story.

    I look forward to her response to Sid's declaration of love.

    Thanks for all the updates tonight!
    November 26th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • soupy

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    @ Sportsfan83
    You are the best!
    November 26th, 2012 at 06:05am
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    @ soupy
    nope! Working on it RIGHT now!
    November 26th, 2012 at 05:50am
  • soupy

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    You are killing me!!!
    Would it be too much to ask for one more tonight???
    November 26th, 2012 at 05:22am
  • soupy

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    Ok, now you are just toying with us!! The suspense of what it going to happen when Kelly sees Sid for lunch is killing me.
    I really hope you are able to update again soon.
    November 26th, 2012 at 03:47am
  • Fantasy_Reality

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    I'm all caught up, great updates!!
    November 25th, 2012 at 05:11am
  • steph1984

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    <3 this story so much. Can Sid and Kelly just get married and produce their own little bunch of hockey phenoms ?

    Great stuff Very Happy
    November 24th, 2012 at 06:10pm
  • soupy

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    Yup, pretty evident he put his personal life on hold for Kelly - until she could achieve her goals. But he certainly missed Kelly at some of the biggest moments of his life.

    But they were definitely feeling the deep connection back in the day. But I guess Sid is nervous to see whether Kelly's feelings for him are the same as his now.
    November 24th, 2012 at 01:07am
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    @ lostandfrustrated
    Thanks! I'm loving writing it.
    November 24th, 2012 at 12:49am
  • lostandfrustrated

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    Loving the frequent updates! And getting the perspectives of both characters makes it very intriguing. Am enjoying this very much.
    November 24th, 2012 at 12:25am
  • soupy

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    Ok - Kelly had felt the "butterflies" too.

    I guess they were on the same page - I guess the question is whether they both still are?
    November 23rd, 2012 at 08:42pm
  • soupy

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    I think he didnt let anyone in because he was waiting for Kelly. He has been in love with her all along - that is why he sacrificed his own happiness for hers. Now he has to see whether he can have her the way he always wanted.

    But I guess the big question is whether she feels the same way.

    They seem to be in total sync as you mentioned in your notes but does that extend to love?
    November 23rd, 2012 at 04:39am