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  • ElegantFalcon

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    I want to feel happy because of how much Chris loved her, but I also want to feel sad because Lolita's gone. But happy again because this was so well written.
    February 5th, 2013 at 08:06am
  • han jisung xx

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    I can't beleive she's gone. :( cries. brilliant updates.
    February 5th, 2013 at 04:33am
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    Made me cry:( poor Chris:((
    February 4th, 2013 at 10:28pm
  • squidgyyo

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    I hate you guys for making me cry more then 1 time during this story :(
    February 4th, 2013 at 10:11pm
  • ElegantFalcon

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    If the chapter is going to be this sad, you need to give people some warning. Especially for people reading this story while at work
    February 3rd, 2013 at 08:05pm
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    *Sits on the edge of chair shocked* D:
    Alexandria Synister (Idontknow... just came to mind)
    February 3rd, 2013 at 06:41pm
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ PTVTea
    I am sorry, I might be doing a little story afterwards about Chris and his life after Lolita.
    February 3rd, 2013 at 02:25pm
  • squidgyyo

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    Why would you kill her?! Im actually mad you kill her :(
    February 3rd, 2013 at 02:21pm
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    *Sits on the end of the chair nervously...* ANNND THEN!?! D: I'd be traumatized after a dream like that too...
    January 28th, 2013 at 10:34pm
  • han jisung xx

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    I haven't got a clue as to what will happened. Brilliant update.:)
    January 28th, 2013 at 10:02pm
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    I predict that Vicky is either going to find a way to kill the baby or steal it... hmm i wonder
    January 25th, 2013 at 06:12pm
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Yes1 two happy chapters in a row
    January 22nd, 2013 at 11:20pm
  • han jisung xx

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    They're allowed to be together. Heck yeah! Great update. :)
    January 22nd, 2013 at 10:59pm
  • han jisung xx

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    She's going be pregnant. I think so. Or that Vicky girl is going to come back. lol
    Love the update. More soon. :)
    January 21st, 2013 at 07:20am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ ElegantFalcon
    Their chapter will happen next
    January 21st, 2013 at 06:02am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    A nice and happy chapter. What's going to happen with Angelo and Meaghan though?
    January 21st, 2013 at 05:48am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ ElegantFalcon
    Well that scene might have to do with something important that will happen later on in this story :)
    Thank you for commenting.
    January 21st, 2013 at 05:00am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Have to admit, while I was reading this, I kept waiting for someone to come home and walk in on them and make some smart-ass comment. Still a good chapter though.
    January 21st, 2013 at 04:51am
  • han jisung xx

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    Hot damn! lol great update. :)
    January 21st, 2013 at 12:47am
  • han jisung xx

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    Vicky is one of them and she's there to steal Chris. That's what I think anyways. Brilliant update. Love it. <3
    January 18th, 2013 at 08:57pm
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