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  • han jisung xx

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    Great update. :)
    December 20th, 2012 at 08:04pm
  • ElegantFalcon

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    I can't wait to see what's going to happen with Angelo and Meagan. But this is such a happy chapter, especially compared to Chapter 15 of Black Damask.
    December 9th, 2012 at 08:41am
  • han jisung xx

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    FINALLY!! Don't fuck it up again Chris. Great chapter. :D
    December 9th, 2012 at 07:09am
  • Forever.In.Ink

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    Aw Chris you dead romantic you, I love how certain he is although it took screwing the whore to figure it out... BAD CHRIS BAD! Great Chapters :) update soon
    December 9th, 2012 at 06:16am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ Mike.Fuentes
    Hahah, well too badI just went there xD
    At least, he dumped her :D
    Thank you for commenting :D
    December 8th, 2012 at 06:07am
  • han jisung xx

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    Hello...I didn't mean literally fuck her. lol No but seriously good chapter. :D
    December 8th, 2012 at 05:32am
  • han jisung xx

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    Fuck the girlfriend, man. Damn. :( love the chapter. What are you doing, Chris? Fight for Lotila. You know I've read her name a lot and I still can't remember how to spell it. I'm stupid. lol more soon.
    December 7th, 2012 at 11:34pm
  • ShellBell234

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    Ughhh not a girlfriend!! Update soon, love it :)
    December 7th, 2012 at 06:26am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Such a sad chapter, and yet so good. I have to agree with Mike.Fuentes though about the cliffhanger.
    December 6th, 2012 at 03:35am
  • han jisung xx

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    Uhhh well first off... You shouldn't leave such a cliffhanger. It's not nice. lol I'm kidding. I love this story so much. I can't wait to see how this goes. Is he there or just in her head or maybe something else. :) love it. More soon. <3
    December 6th, 2012 at 01:00am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ PTVTea
    I will try to update more since I will be finishing school for the year on Friday but my school laptop that I use at home has to be given back on Friday so I'll have to use my crappy normal computer which has poor Internet connection :/
    But will be hopefully updating this story & the story I co-write called 'Black Damask' which is about Devin Sola.
    December 5th, 2012 at 03:47pm
  • squidgyyo

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    I never though of that, Please update ASAP!!!!! I loved Lolita and I LOVE this story already! <3
    December 5th, 2012 at 03:43pm
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ PTVTea
    Or maybe he might be in her mind ;)
    You never know...
    December 5th, 2012 at 03:33pm
  • squidgyyo

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    He is in her room! I hope they get back together!! I love this, cant wait for more
    December 5th, 2012 at 02:57pm
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ Mike.Fuentes
    Thank you so very much <3
    December 1st, 2012 at 09:46am
  • han jisung xx

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    :patiently waiting for this to be updated: :updates: :I go freaking crazy: that's pretty much how I was. I really like this chapter but I say kick Chris's butt for making her leave just because, you know. love the update, dear. <3
    December 1st, 2012 at 09:43am
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    @ ElegantFalcon
    Thank you and don't apologize, I was going to take a little break anyways even without being a co-writer in the story Black Damask :)
    November 30th, 2012 at 03:16pm
  • ElegantFalcon

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    I like the title. And how the sequel is starting so far. I apologize to your fans for stealing you away.
    November 29th, 2012 at 04:15pm
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    @ Mike.Fuentes
    Thank you, I shall be writing the second chapter very soon after I complete writing my chapter for the co-writer story Black Damask :)
    November 28th, 2012 at 01:50pm
  • han jisung xx

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    great first chapter to the sequel. loved it. i really hope more people comment because this sounds good already. :D
    November 28th, 2012 at 09:42am
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