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  • Forever.In.Ink

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    Who is this vicky person? and why oh why is she appearing now?!? Whats wrong with them, there freaking out for nothing... Ghost had a point chris asked her to marry him before sooo i dont understand his behaviour now! They just need to sit down and TALK IT OUT, BE COMFORTING NOT SECRETIVE AND NERVOUS lol (Caps not intended as yelling <3 ) the messages where Cute.
    THEY NEED MORE CUTE MOMENTS!
    update soon? :)
    January 18th, 2013 at 07:53am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ ElegantFalcon
    I think Vicky might show up a bit more in the story so keep your eyes open for some more clues with Vicky.
    January 18th, 2013 at 07:44am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    What's with Vicky? And what's wrong with Lolita? Everything has to work out perfect for them
    January 18th, 2013 at 07:38am
  • han jisung xx

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    Love the update. I hope things will go okay. :) more soon.
    January 17th, 2013 at 11:47pm
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Lolita should be happy about the wedding, nothing can go wrong
    January 17th, 2013 at 10:57pm
  • han jisung xx

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    @ TheRockshowChick
    Yes. You both are. :)
    Sure. That would be awesome. :D
    January 17th, 2013 at 05:00am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ Mike.Fuentes
    It was wasn't it? She is such a great writer!
    Also when we finish this story do you want me to contact you so we could write a story together? :)
    January 17th, 2013 at 04:58am
  • han jisung xx

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    Brilliant update. Both great writers. :)
    January 17th, 2013 at 04:48am
  • SewYourEyesShut

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    @ ElegantFalcon
    Aw thankyou! That's really sweet :)
    January 15th, 2013 at 08:01am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ ElegantFalcon
    I'm currently writing Chris' POV and it hopefully will show a bit of an inside on what he is feeling.
    Thank you for reading and commenting :)
    January 15th, 2013 at 06:39am
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Yay! She's excited. And this story now has two good writers to make it even better.
    January 15th, 2013 at 05:41am
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ Mike.Fuentes
    Oh it's alright and don't worry I might write another story after Breathe and we could always do it together if you wanted to work together?
    I'll be updating very soon so keep an eye out for the next chapter!
    January 15th, 2013 at 05:25am
  • han jisung xx

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    WHAT IS THIS!!!! HOW CAN I MISS CHAPTERS??? I AM SO SORRY!!!!
    I love the chapter. I wish I would of seen this sooner because I would of love to write with you. :)
    I can't wait to see what is going to happen.
    January 15th, 2013 at 04:34am
  • SewYourEyesShut

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    I would love to co-author! Message me if you want me to help or not :)
    January 12th, 2013 at 06:33pm
  • han jisung xx

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    Love this update. I can't wait to see what happens between Angelo and Meaghan. Also with Chris and Lolita. :)
    December 31st, 2012 at 01:20am
  • SewYourEyesShut

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    Welcome! x
    December 30th, 2012 at 02:12pm
  • TheRockshowChick

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    @ MIW Forever
    Oh thank you! :D xo
    December 30th, 2012 at 02:11pm
  • SewYourEyesShut

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    I'm actually in love with this story!
    December 30th, 2012 at 02:03pm
  • han jisung xx

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    Have I comment on this since you updated? I don't think so. I'm sorry. I've been really busy with work. I love this story. I can't wait for another update.

    You could maybe have them go on a date just to take it slow now. Or something.
    December 26th, 2012 at 10:19pm
  • ElegantFalcon

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    Um...MIW goes on tour and Lolita goes with them. Somehow she ends up running into someone she knew but hasn't talked to since the whole becoming a vampire thing. Sorry, that's the best I've got.
    December 24th, 2012 at 11:58am
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