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  • MusicFan

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    Great update! Jimmy is such a good friend but i still want Izzy and Shadows to get back together. Brian is a nice guy but i"m still team Shadows.
    December 12th, 2012 at 06:30pm
  • helena_88

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    50 shadows darker.. now that sounds like an interesting book Mr. Green

    MOTHER FUCKING VENGEANCE!!!!!!!!!! I just wanna.. GAH!! he's such an ass..!! i've said it before and i'll keep saying it probably through out this whole story.. i.don't.like.him!! Mr. Green

    jimbo getting angry, yay!! finally! :)
    jacoby is so cute though..
    shads.. well.. damn..
    part of me wants izzy and him to get back together and the other part wants.. no wait.. she should go back to shads.. now i kinda start to feel like Brian is too good for her.. Mr. Green moahahah she's such a fuck up Mr. Green
    December 12th, 2012 at 11:28am
  • Moriarty;

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    Come on Izzy stop fucking around with your feelings and just get together with Bri-Bear already. It's obvious he loves you like crazy and Zacky's just a bitch who's using you for sex! I want to go into the story and throttle her until she gets the message! Great chapter- I can't wait to read the next one :)
    December 12th, 2012 at 08:53am
  • gothique4

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    poor Brian - he's just had his little heart broken :-(

    Damn, is it just me or is Vengeance softening up a bit? Didn't expect him to stay and cuddle afterward :-/

    No, Brian don't change!!!!!! Vengeance is a prick 95% of the time lol

    I'm glad that Izzy finally admitted to herself the effect that Vengeance has on her, but she would be so much more better off with Brian. I just hope that Brian doesn't go off all butthurt and give her the cold shoulder

    Wow my Jimmy is a regular Dr Phil :-)
    December 12th, 2012 at 06:44am
  • purple89

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    @ MoMo_92
    im team Brian too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    December 12th, 2012 at 05:44am
  • MoMo_92

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    I enjoy tht chapter I am team Brian and Jimmy is an understanding person, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 12th, 2012 at 05:05am
  • MusicFan

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    @ purple89
    well i hope that happens for you:) I just hope its a good new year haha
    December 11th, 2012 at 05:06am
  • purple89

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    @ MusicFan
    i hope that everything i have planned for the new year comes true...and maybe wanting a new car...we'll see how that pans out...
    December 11th, 2012 at 01:48am
  • MusicFan

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    @ purple89
    I dont really know haha what are you looking forward to?
    December 11th, 2012 at 12:26am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    hmm. Im in the same boat as everyone. Im wondering what the hell Tuck is up to. I dint trust him as for as he can be thrown..lol. And Camachio is dead:( Tuck was his godson...thats just cold. Izzy needs to get the hell outta dodge before shit gets real. lol
    December 10th, 2012 at 11:28pm
  • gothique4

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    OK so Tuck is seriously confusing me too - I'd say that he started out working for Taylor and Night and I'm kinda intrigued as to why he didn't say that she was under the bed. He intimated that it was part of Taylor's plan so I can't trust him at all not to be trying to play both sides off against each other.

    It's so not good that Night has turned up and now Camachio is dead :-( I wonder how Tuck is going to handle that news, as he must be close to the man being his godson and all.

    They need to get Izzy out of there and back home before something else happens. She needs the whole gang around her to keep her safe, and to find out why all the other gangs are so interested in her. Did her father leave her something in his will that she doesn't know about?
    December 10th, 2012 at 08:48pm
  • purple89

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    @ Katrina;
    Tuck is confusing me too and i'm the author!!!
    December 10th, 2012 at 07:04pm
  • Katrina;

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    Tuck is confusing the hell out of me, I just want to know what side he's on so I know whether to like or dislike him. I can't believe Signor Camachio is dead D: Update soon!
    December 10th, 2012 at 07:04pm
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    Oh my gosh cliffhanger! I can't believe they killed Signor Camachio- I hate them so much! At least Jim Jam and Bri-Bear are there to keep her safe :) I wanna know what side Tuck's on- the plot is thickening! Update soon- I'm so excited!
    December 10th, 2012 at 06:10pm
  • Norman Reedus

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    I think TUck's trying to trick them into believing them even if he's on Slipknots and Night's side. He's trying to earn their trust hehe
    December 10th, 2012 at 06:10pm
  • MoMo_92

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    What in the hell is goin on, what is it about Izzy tht every gang wants her I mean can she remember numbers or what the hell is it, and Matt Tuck u r confusing as hell right now and I don't like either u r with Taylor and them or not but I won't tolerate this double crossing at all, they need to get the hell out of there now, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:44pm
  • purple89

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    @ BornForVengeance
    ahahaha...don't worry dear...we'll definately see some sort of romance blossoming soon..and hopefully there wont be any regrets....
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:16pm
  • purple89

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    @ MusicFan
    oh i diid.......(blush blush)...now onto celebrating christmas....i know what i want this year..do you?
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:15pm
  • purple89

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    @ BeenDownThatRoad
    i still haven't finshed my christmas shopping...highly tempted to just do every goddamn thing online this year!!
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:14pm
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    @ gothique4
    i kinda pictured Marvin the Martian when i wrote the Johnny part!! hahah!! my fav part was writing the conversation between Vengeance and Jimmy...i could so see Vengeance looking like he could jump through the phone and strangle jimmy!!!!
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:13pm