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  • purple89

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    i think poor Shadows head is spinning with all the madness!!! Tuck has some serious personality disorder or something, but i think he is playing both sides.....we'll see....and where will they go? probably back home...things keep unravelling for a7x :(
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:12pm
  • helena_88

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    Matt Tuck.. yeah i can't.. i dunno, he makes me confused Mr. Green one minute he's on Taylors side and the next he doesn't tell that he found Izzy.. What game is he playing and was that the next step of the plan?? to make them believe that he actually helped Izzy? Make them take him under their wings so he can take them down from the inside?? hmm..

    Night.. that bastard he needs to be 6ft under already.. hahahah

    I bet Shadows is getting an ulcer or something very soon with everything that just keeps happening...

    Bri.. well at least he didn't get hurt this time around <3 heheheheheh

    Signor Camachio is dead?? Oh damn!! where are they supposed to go now?? i mean it can't really be safe back in Cali either.. O_o
    December 10th, 2012 at 05:09pm
  • gothique4

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    Oh lord so many things to comment on in this chapter!

    First things first, Johnny the little pyromaniac. I don't know why but I just a vision of him like a tiny Marvin the Martian holding sticks of dynamite :p I must be sleep deprived.

    Secondly, how the hell do Slipknot keep getting the drop on them and knowing exactly where they are? This can't be good.

    I love the sarcastic banter between Jimmy and Vengeance.
    “Who the fuck says smithereens anymore V?” laughed Jimmy, trying to lighten Vengeance up.
    “I do, thank you very much. Is that all you took from what I just told you?” growled Vengeance, his temper clearly rising. Hahahaha I can just picture a certain green eyed man about to explode lol

    “Out, he’s been a zombie for the past few days, and the man blew another gasket an hour ago.” Stated Vengeance sounding bored. Oh dear, Shadows has been getting a bit trigger happy hasn't he?

    Oh god, and now Tuck's turned up to the party and I'm wondering why none of the guys knew that he was Camachio's godson. It almost seems like Camachio is the one feeding the other gangs the information.

    I don't for a minute trust Tuck and all his stories about wanting to join with A7X. He'd be more likely to be working with Slipknot and just trying to spy on A7X from within.

    Cant wait to read more :-)
    December 8th, 2012 at 10:28pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Ugh, I here you on the christmas front, I went shopping all day yesterday and im still not done..blah. lol

    Anywho, i loved this update. Your detailing is always so effortless. I really love your writing!
    Poor Shadows, missing Izzy and stressing himself out! I wonder what he is going to do when he finds out Slipknot has leads on Izzy AND the Tuck is there too and is Camachio's godson! How ould they not know such a huge detail? My favourite part of this whole update though was Jimmy and Vengeance talking about Short Shit...lol, little pyro maniac, I love it! More soon please!!
    December 8th, 2012 at 07:48pm
  • helena_88

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    ah damn it.. matt tuck.. i can't decide if i want izzy to talk to shadz and have them to join a7x's side in the on coming battle with slipknot.. i'm just so torn..

    gah! slipknot's everywhere.. they just pop out, out of nowhere and be like HI! fancy seeing you here... O_o creepy.. lol

    aawh shadz having nightmares <3 and cory turning into vengeance in the dreams.. moahahah that's really bad Mr. Green

    loved jimmy's talk with vengeance, he's just so goofy.. i love him..

    and johnny having fun blowing shit up.. i can totally picure him running around with a big happy smile on his face and two lit red dynamites(? -those from the cartoons) in his hands.. heheheheheheh
    December 8th, 2012 at 07:47pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, I don't trust Tuck one bit, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 8th, 2012 at 07:20pm
  • MoMo_92

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    @ purple89
    Poor guy smh
    December 6th, 2012 at 02:28am
  • MoMo_92

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    @ purple89
    Poor guy smh
    December 6th, 2012 at 02:28am
  • purple89

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    @ MoMo_92
    i think they left poor Johnny back in the bar and said "find your own way home biznatch!"
    December 6th, 2012 at 12:36am
  • MoMo_92

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    Um wat about Johnny??? Can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 5th, 2012 at 08:16pm
  • helena_88

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    HE.FELL.ASLEEP.ON.HER??!! laughing my fricking boobs off!! that i did not expect from Gates!! so funny!! Mr. Green Dana and Jimmy following them?? now that didn't really surprise me at all Wink

    aawe i don't wanna be mean to Vengeance (yes i do) but couldn't the stupid chick at least like put a bullet in his shoulder or something?? Mr. Green hahahah naah, it was fun, and damn he's one sick son of a bitch isn't he?? Very Happy

    taylor.. i'm kinda scared of what that dude is up too..
    December 5th, 2012 at 06:28pm
  • MusicFan

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    Hope you had a great first wedding anniversary and great update!
    December 5th, 2012 at 03:27pm
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    lol, I love Jimmy and Dana! that whole awkward morning thing was great! As much as I loved all of that, all the stuff with Vengeance was just awesome!
    I love what a bad ass he is. So cold and just bad...lol, its kinda sexy. Maybe its just me..lol.
    Cant wait to read whats next! What evil, diabolical plan is Vengeance thinking up? More please, I am in love with this! and happy belated first anniversary! It goes by fast!
    December 5th, 2012 at 09:36am
  • gothique4

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    ooh so Bri Bri actually remembers the night and it's only Izzy who doesn't? I wonder if he'll tell her everything that happened. And damn that he feel asleep on her :-

    Oh lord I was in hysterics at me and Jimmy giving Izzy hell about her escapades with Brian, and following them when they came in lol.

    Damn, Caitlyn was a damn fool and little bitch deserved to die for agreeing to kill Vengeance for Taylor. Dumbass move pulling his own gun on him because he sure got it off her quick. Only Vengeance would continue where they left off, then kill her.

    I love how calm Vengeance was talking to Shadows about Cam and JB hauling off a dead body. Shadows would have been grinding his teeth like a madman lol
    December 5th, 2012 at 07:02am
  • helena_88

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    I didn't drown myself in the snow, you wont be rid of my stupid comments just yet hheheheh

    Oh damn now Gontier wants to meet Izzy?? Uh-OH!! and Taylor is going to do something to Shadz.. gah! can't he take the wrong dude and do something to vengeance instead??? Mr. Green aawe i feel mean now.. Cool

    jimmy and dana.. lmfbo!! frickin' duracell-bunnies!! Mr. Green but yeah.. if i'd had one of those men (pref. syn or shadz, wouldn't say no to jimbo) then i wouldn't let him leave the bedroom either!!! moahahahah

    Gates and Izzy.. holy cow!! finally kissing and damn she still had clothes on.. so i guess they never slept together, well they slept but no sex?? Mr. Green aawh was it gates that stopped it because izzy was so drunk?? that wouldn't surprise me one bit.. god he is just.. yea anyway........ Mr. Green

    aawh have fun!! <3
    December 2nd, 2012 at 10:18am
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    Is she sad that she slept with Gates? WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU WOMAN? Given the chance I would ravage Syn until he passed out :) Such a good chapter, I love this sequel so far, as much as I loved the prequel. Also, Dana and Jimmy- CUTEST COUPLE EVER! Update soon- I'm going to be waiting!
    December 2nd, 2012 at 09:53am
  • MoMo_92

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    Wow make me feel like a celebrity, and I'm glad u feel tht way towards my apperance on ur comment section lol anyhoo umm did Brian and Izzy do what I think they did becuz if soo yay even tho they were drunk, but I agree with Dana I think tht Izzy should take time away from the guys and think about who she really wants, I'm team Brian on this story all the way through, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    December 2nd, 2012 at 09:25am
  • gothique4

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    hehehehehe I'm a screamer that's scarring Gates for life - I like that!!!! :-)

    Ooh, the chemistry between Gates and Izzy is just building and building. I wasn't surprised that they woke up in bed together considering how hammered they got, but it will be interesting to see what Izzy thinks of it once her hangover subsides.

    I think I'd prefer to see her with Gates too, as he's not as complicated as Shadows. Sure Shadows loves her but he treats her more like a possession which is why they fight all the time.

    I turned into a regular Dr Ruth didn't I? Damn I give some good advice lol. But seriously though, she does need some time to herself to sort out her feelings and work out what she wants.
    December 2nd, 2012 at 07:24am
  • BeenDownThatRoad

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    Well, at least they still had some clothes on so all is not wrecked! She still needs time to process all of her feelings and take time for herself. I do want her with Gates, but I want her to want him because he is great, not because he is there and she is lonely, you know what I mean?
    I'm scared for Shadows with Taylor on the loose, I have a feeling that he has a whole shit storm headed his way while Izzy is on "Vacation". More soon please, I am seriously addicted to this story!
    December 2nd, 2012 at 06:24am
  • purple89

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    @ Spoileddxbrat I agree....but she needs some Izzy time first then we'll see what happens. I'm all for her and gates!!
    December 2nd, 2012 at 04:42am