20 Days of You - Comments

Damn Brian- you left her cold! Great update hun, I can't wait for the next one :)

Damn I was all hot & bothered reading & then it ended & I was like nooo.lol Great story so far, very well written.

I like this. It's different than anything I've read so far and in that sense I seem to be getting into quickly. I am amazed by this.

Brian sure getting her all hot and bothered..he's really going to make her ache for him. Amazing update :D

Fucking Brian.. really? No sex for a few days? You're making all of us ache. Brian as a lawyer is beyond sexy.. Mmf. Okay, please update as soon as possible!

I'm really loving it so far, please update soon :)

Damn you Brian, left me hanging :P it was so hot :P and completely agree with BeenDownThatRoad :D I would too, and I think that's very sexy too, and can imagine him with suit too :P rawr :P Update soon!!! :D

I am so into this story already!!! I would gladly do what she is!! And with someone that looks like him... Whew. Gives me shivers. Lol. I love hour writing style, it's very descriptive, but not overdone. And he's a lawyer?? That's so sexy, I could just picure him in a sexy suit.. Yum. Update soon!

I need more. All there is to say. :)

really enjoyed reading this story!
love it!
can't wait for more!!

saucy. and seductive! haha. i'm on tenterhooks waiting for the next chapter!

Loved the update.

The prologue is very well written and the plot of this is super intriguing!! I can't wait to read more!

The prologue is amazing!
I can't wait to read more soon :D

asdfghjkl, this issss loooking goood.
I must admit, I was a bit adamant to this at first. I thought it would be like most fanfics where they're poorly written and just hold basic plots. But no, this could go somewhere good.
I hope too the sex scenes aren't all, "Suspense and then cut to next day" Sort of thing, that would be depressing.
But keep it up, and let's see where this beauty goes, shall we?
UPDATE SOON :) Chazly

That story is promising. I love the fact that Brian could guess her real intentions from the begining.
Looking foward for next chapter :-)

I'm still reading, but I had to say that I loved the fact that you used the word 'mocha' to describe his eyes! I'm guilty, but 'chocolate' is over used.

It's only the prologue and 'm excited. Update ASAP! It's interesting and I love the way you describe things! Keep it up! Hoping for another one soon!

I'm so friggin excited for this!! I would definitely sign up for twenty days of glory with Brian. Damn. Lol . I loved this first update. Your writing is really good:) I can't wait for the next update:D

this story is awesome. you're doing awesome!

I love this so much already !Please update as soon as you can! Don't feel intimidated we all love this story already, I can tell!