Beneath Your Perfect - Comments

Loved this update! But I do think that she overreacted a little bit! Can't wait for the two of them to end up together! :)

Awhhh :'( I love them together, I want it !

I definitely knew he had it, but I didn't think she would go ape shit! Holy cow!

Home girl needs to calm her tits.

Loving it so far!!! the almost kiss moment was perfect, can't wait for their real first kiss (which better happen) haha. I tihnk she did overreact about the book slightly but I have a feeling they will make up soon. Keep the updates coming!! :D

Loved it! Gah! I had my suspicions about where the notebook was being held captive, but I do believe that in retrospect Jade did overreact a tad. However, when it comes to matters of the heart it tends to become inevitable. Especially when you've got two broken people just searching for someone to love all the pieces of their broken hearts. C'est la vie. Can't wait until the next update, Love!

I am in love with this story! Dark, broken Liam has my heart in tatters!

I'm ready for the truth to come out already!! Jesus!

I'm TOTALLY psyched that she's developing feelings. I really want them to have an argument which has them in tears from being so honest because so much of their relationship has been lies. I feel like it would really help them! :) I can't wait for more and I'm very happy to hear that it'll be coming in more quickly!!

Awww I really like how they are Liam is trying to be all cute but cautious at the same time. And I feel like maybe Eleanor knows more than she should know or something. Hmm. Her friends are awesome cause they tell it like it is! Can't wait for next update :)

I really like how you have written Sarah and Aria and this story is really good please update soon!

I'm inlooooove with this story! plz update asap xxxxx

Liam's so cute. I really wanted to slap him at the begining, but now I want to give him a big hug and sweeze his internal organs to mush! And this chapter as good as ever.

YAY REAL SMILES!!!! :D they deserve happiness! <3 <3

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Can they just have like an uberly cute moment aw aw

The scene with the brother was funny haha a little overprotective!

I don't want u not update for a week!! I NEED to read more!!!!

Ahhhhhhhhhh THEY ARE SO CUTE OH MYYYYYYY

Hope you have a blast holiday! Wooooo!

OH MY GOD. Wow. Liam's just so . . . broken. Did Dani break him??? Why is he like this. He's hurting his band mates!! Why can't he see that???? EEEEHHHHHNNNN

It's so good to have this side of Liam, it's very emotional. I love that everything is not just out on the table. Slowly with each chapter we are pulling back Liam's layers. I have to say this a very good Liam story. Keep up the good work.

Love this story. Very different from the other 1D stories. Love it's rawness. Keep up! :)