Forever Enemies - Comments

this is an amazing story! I love it! Can't wait for an update!

hmm the ghost captain gave him a very powerful bracelet- if he is on killian side that is..
i'm not sure if what delilah is seeing at that moment is true or not- rumpel seem to love to mess with her head. I think it is hook that she's with at the beach- well that she think it is him at least. don't think it's the real one- same with the ship. BUT if it truly is him, then damn!!

hahaha seriously rumpel is so damn mean breaking delilah like that..
hmm.. i wonder why the ghost captain wants killian to save delilah- and what was it he offered as a help?? O.o

hmm so that little dream rumpel made her have was weird.. the captain wanted her to be with someone that had a future? meaning killian then??

gah i have no idea what rumpels end game is- he is too weird to figure out.. hahah
i just know that he would want to torture killian as much as possible for taking milah..

i hope killian stick to the plan with the ghost captain and that the ghost isn't tricking him in the prosess- i mean he is kind of working for rumpel so ya never know

wooah shit so it was Rumpel all along.. I hate that croc..
he's sneaky though, knowing that Killian might feel something for Delilah- so he took her.. hmm I wonder where he 'hid' her and what Killian will do now?

@ amodernmyth88
He only heard what she said, she is the only one that sees him.

whoops!! did killian see and hear the captain or did he just hear delilah's last sentence about rumpel??

it's never a good thing to make a deal with him, but worse to not honor your end of the deal. i hope killian somehow gets her on his side and that they figure out who the ghost (well other ghost) captain is

curious to why her captain keep showin up, and why now- when rumpel, killian and the other captain entered her life??

this is just getting more and more mysterious and i love it!!
hmm maybe rumpel doesn't want her to spend too much time with Hook because she might fall for him?? ah i dunno.. and i have no idea what's up with the ghost captain

oooh was he naked in bed?? damn!!
ghost ship, i don't really think going onto it will be a smart idea.. i'd rather try to get away from it and head to neverland in hopes that it wont follow ahahah

but yeah, i think it's the captain.. but no idea why he would attack when she's on hooks ship..??
she didn't do anything to him did she??
and again, not sure if she remembers right in who killed the captain..

i wonder what they'll discover when/if they manage to get onboard of the ghost ship..

and if killian manages to get away to neverland, will delilah go with him? if only to try and bring him back to rumpel

the captain.. i think he is trying to tell her something.. or warn her.. maybe hook wasn't the man that killed him? she could have seen or remember it wrong.. who knows..
mystery ship, might be the captains ghost ship thingy, it did just pop out of nowhere and go faster than normal..
heheheh how will she explain her situation now?? is she going to blame her screaming on a giant spider or something?? if she tells them it was a ghost they'll surely think she's crazy

merry x-mas

a ghost?? maybe the ghost of the captain??
hmmm yeah killian did act weird.. didn't tell the truth about the old man and he did seem a little too relaxed about that mystery ship.. i wonder what's going on

Love the story so far!!!! Your very talented! Can't wait for more updates! :)

i think that she'll have a croc after her in the end, just like Hook..
AND Hook prob. knows more about that old guy than he's telling her, he tends to keep things to himself if he knows that it'll be good for him in the end.. he's always thinking of himself first hand..
so the pub was rumpel's.. damn, talk about taking a risk going in there..

ooh who's the old guy that want's her wedding ring?? her dad?? the old captain?? eeh.. someone else??

hahahah they're prob. being followed and she calls him a bad captain.. so funny

hmm a pub named after Milah.. that's a big weird can't wait to see what'll happen next

@ amodernmyth88
All very good guess, but you shall have to wait for the next update or so to really find out. I'll tell you that one of the three things you suggested will happen though. Don't wanna give away too much.

ooh so she found love with a captain, and then jones came onto their ship.. i wonder what happened did the captain die? if so, was it hooks fault?? or did the captain get tired of delilah?

now that's a heartbreaking background story, and Hook knows it.. damn aawh he knows her better than she think, totally knew that she'd try the window damn who can resist hook when he smiles though?? and dressed the way he is?? YUM!

can't wait to see where this will be headed