Method to the Madness - Comments

This story is very intriguing. Although I haven't been able to go through all of it, the parts I did read were good. Besides lightening up the whoe thing with some more unique layout, I found slight errors throughout some chapters. Try and shorten your sentences. Doing that helps prevent fragments along with run-on sentences. I may be wrong but I believe death witches is two words like grim reaper. All in all good job!

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This is interesting, its definitely not a cliche story like most on here. Your style of writing is really different and unique, I like the way this story draws you in so easily, definitely worth reading

@ Luckwing
Haha, thanks :3

@ Luckwing
I told her so, too :)

There's no way that qualifys as a suckish chapter, i liked it!

I loved it!!! Nice job!

I really liked it!

I'm so.... That was awesome. You are really great. I kinda just started reading it, and ended up getting an hour sucked into it.

That was so sweet! I loved it!

Ahhh. No cliff-hanger! Really good though.

You amaze me with the speed of which you update, and your storys are still great! I am envious!

@ Luckwing

Thanks so much!! Glad you like it! :)

In awe. That was awesome.

@ Luckwing
Yes, Crimson knows; she was part of it xD

@ River Song
Thanks for the comment! We try not to repeat events too often though; sometimes its hard to avoid because of two separate characters though -shrugs-

Oooohhh! That's so sad! Poor Alyson and really poor Elias. Does Crimson know that Mouse kidnapped him and stole his memory? She's scary good at acting if she does.

This totally reminds me of The Host, but this is a very good thing. Ah. This makes me so happy, you don't even know.

Also, the layout is totally gorgeous. I usually hate it when people use large images like this, but you really pulled it off.

Overall, the writing is good, but sometimes I feel like things are repeated, but that's only to be expected in a co-written story.

Keep up the good work!

comment swap!

I'm up to Chapter 5 and so far I really like the story; it's creative and original and easy to understand after it's been explained. The layout is pretty, but the test is a little large in size for me personally. I wish the chapters were a little longer with more detailed descriptions.

I'm only on the second chapter but this is really cool. Totally different from anything I've read on here:) Keep it up guys!

@ Luckwing
I guess you'll have to keep reading to find out! ;)