Method to the Madness - Comments

Don't you just hate it when you know something that the charactor doesn't and you just feel like yelling at her? Ah, the things we put our poor charactors through for a good story.
I like how it's Cat and Mouse. It makes me wonder if Cat's going to kill Mouse.

So, does Elias like Alyson in that way, or is it and unrequitted love?

Nice! It amazes me for some reason about how evil Mouse really is! She looked really innocent before, even though I didn't trust her.

Oh, I absolutly HATE Crimson, she's just so evil! But every good story needs a good villain, I suppose.

id read more but its reeeeeeeeeeeeeally late....im DEFINITELY intrigued though

Oooh! This is soo cool! I just have to say this reminds me a little of the Host by Stephenie Meyer. By that I mean it's so surreal and everything is described so amazing that I can't help but want to read more! :) Good job! I'm so recommending and subscribing!

I love it ^^ <3

This story is unique, and the writing is good as well. Your plot is unique, which is amazing because there are a lot of bad cliche stories out there, though cliche stories aren't that bad because everyone should read one once in awhile.

I like this a lot, and I may even subscribe and recommend.

I am enjoying this story very much. it is very good indeed, and I will continue reading :)

I knew there was a reason why I didn't trust Mouse! Nicely done, though, that was really well written!

Nice! I really like the plot and your writing is really good.