Guardians of Innistrad - Comments

@ amykart
I understand what you are speaking of. I did not write the first chapter of Kyiers. The original author dropped and I took his/her place. I had to do some research and studying to try to get a feel for what he/she was trying to accomplish. As well as for what direction the character's story would go into. I intentionally tried to leave it a mystery so I can continue the next chapter with my own direction for Kyiers. Basically chapter two is my merging chapter. a merge between what the old author was doing and what I intend to do with Kyiers. :) Thanks for your input

Hi. Comment swap sent me here! Woo first comment. I've gotta say this story has a cool concept but I'm currently really confused. Your writing makes things pretty unclear. If the whole mysterious thing was what you were going for then you got it down pat. If not, you might want to clarify your writing a bit more.