January 15th, 2015 at 01:48am
Comment swap.
I honestly don't know who this fanfic is about but I like the story. I loved when you described Mr. Kipps death. Is that bad? Haha. Well anyways I love the story. Recommended and subscribed :) keep up the good work.
I'm about six chapters in and wow! Echo is just all piss and vinegar and I like it! She's sassy and interesting, even if her jadedness is somewhat annoying (not a bad thing, I'm just not 16 anymore :P).
You have nice amount of detail which I like, but not so much the story is long winded or difficult to read.
Overall I think you've got a good story going. :) Cheer to you!