Triangles - Comments

Comment swap brought me here! :)
I'm about six chapters in and wow! Echo is just all piss and vinegar and I like it! She's sassy and interesting, even if her jadedness is somewhat annoying (not a bad thing, I'm just not 16 anymore :P).
You have nice amount of detail which I like, but not so much the story is long winded or difficult to read.
Overall I think you've got a good story going. :) Cheer to you!

Comment swap.
I honestly don't know who this fanfic is about but I like the story. I loved when you described Mr. Kipps death. Is that bad? Haha. Well anyways I love the story. Recommended and subscribed :) keep up the good work.

Comment Swap brought me here! I like the layout and the way you have points of view, I write a lot of stories like that. I have currently read up to chapter nine and will be reading more later, I've subscribed and recommended :)

Comment Swap brought me here! I like the layout and the way you have points of view, I write a lot of stories like that. I have currently read up to chapter nine and will be reading more later, I've subscribed and recommended :)

So, I'm starting off this story, and I think it's amazing so far. It's so cute, and you've got a ton of detail (Which is so perfectly described). It's perfection. I think you’ve done an amazing job so far – sadly, I have no idea who The Blackout is, given that I found your story because of a comment swap, but it sounds like a band I’d be into, so I’m going to look in on that, and then I’ll come back and read the rest of it.

@ Simplecircuitry
It's okay, I'm glad you liked the story :3

Sorry about the double post. :(

Comment Swap!

My, does Echo Moon have a personality! She's very expressive, reminds me just a bit of Mandella from 10 Things I hate About You. Your writing is nice and easy to follow. Only thing I noticed is that in the first chapter you kept expressing how Echo could care less. I think you meant to say that she couldn't care less. Just a minor thing, nothing big. Anyway, keep up the good work!

Comment Swap!

My, does Echo Moon have a personality! She's very expressive, reminds me just a bit of Mandella from 10 Things I hate About You. Your writing is nice and easy to follow. Only thing I noticed is that in the first chapter you kept expressing how Echo could care less. I think you meant to say that she couldn't care less. Just a minor thing, nothing big. Anyway, keep up the good work!

@ mirrorboy
Evil things ): I have a test in Welsh tomorrow .-.

@ enemies.
mutations are my biggest enemy >:(

@ mirrorboy
It's mainly the farmers that speak Welsh here, it's their first language. I struggle with it grammatically >.<

@ enemies.
When me and my friends speak Welsh we get funny looks, it sucks :( that's cool :') We just have a Blue Banana in Cardiff and one in Newport haha :p

@ mirrorboy
We speak Gog :3 Bangor has this really awesome shop where I got a BFMV tee and Criminal Damage jeans :3

@ enemies.
you don't really need to go anywhere, I've been up to Bangor and the likes a few times and really all that's different is the accent and the fact that the Welsh language suddenly disappears haha

@ mirrorboy
I like Cardiff, but other than that we've never really been South. It's terrible up here too >.<

@ enemies.
it's really not everywhere bar Cardiff is a shithole haha :')

@ mirrorboy
Oooh lucky ;D

@ enemies.
ah that's cool ^^ I'm from South East Wales, y'know that place where all the cool bands are from ;D ...but I don't have an accent at all :(

@ mirrorboy
Thank you ^.^ x Glad you liked it :3

I'm from sort of North West Wales (Snowdonia) so I don't have a sexy accent ):