I wish I was good at leaving nice long comments because if I could, I would I'd write a paragraph about how great this story is. You're an amazing writer c:
I absolutely loved this chapter. It's so sweet from the beginning till the end and my favorite part was where Michelle and Jake were arguing about summer plans.
I also didn't know that there was really a book on Revolutionary Road, can I get it online for free? It seems very interesting. Don't worry, I'm not mad that you spoiled the ending to me.
Anyway(s), I'm looking forward to the next update. Don't take too long please!
Even if your chapters are ridiculously long, I have to admit that they're pretty worthy for printing. I admire your style of writing and the story itself. How you've created the plot and the characters is such an amazing talent.
Okay, I've always wanted to say this.. I FINISHED READING THE REST OF THE STORY! It didn't take me a while, your story was so interesting to read because it builds.
Speaking of your story building, I'm looking forward to the next update of yours. Can't wait!
I just recently saw this story and figured to give it a shot. I read the summary which was quite interesting and went on to the first chapter. The first chapter was really long and I have to give it to you, I'm not a fan of long chapters. Anyway, right now I'm in chapter two and figuring that this story is going to flow pretty well afterwards.
Characters: I think I have a small background on every character here. With only two chapters, you've managed to offer some history between the main character and her siblings. Right now, I'm in favor of Matt because of his warm attitude.
You did a very good job in keeping characters as individuals. It's hard to explain but each character is unique and has their own way of speaking. I'd say you have a talent for creating your own personal fiction people.
Plot: Although the story flows pretty well, I don't have any idea where this story is going. At first, I thought that it was a bad idea for leaving your readers clueless but I've thought about it and I believe it's a good thing because you're letting your readers yearn for more.
I'm clearly subscribing and recommending it. Hope I catch up soon!
ok this so deserves more support and love then it has gotten i love all your characters and how great jake and veronica are together, please update again real soon!