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  • Lanabear

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    This. Is. Something. Else. Such a great story in a nice concise setting. Thank you so much for writing this ❤️
    May 18th, 2021 at 12:37am
  • mrsmshadz

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    I love this story!! I just didn't like that she rolled her eyes... A lot.
    July 30th, 2015 at 09:01am
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    Hahahahah so they did!
    July 30th, 2015 at 02:23am
  • mrsmshadz

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    They forgot to blow dry her hair!!
    July 30th, 2015 at 02:04am
  • pawnsinplay

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    Thank you! I actually have considered doing a sequel. I loved writing that story with those characters and would love to continue with them. If I can come up with something that's not ridiculously pointless, I will haha :P
    February 13th, 2014 at 05:36am
  • HanerJoy

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    I loooved this story!!!!!!! Brian is so sweet :) I wished that after she said all that to her mother she would have changed and support her daughter. Have you thought about a sequel??? I would love to see what happens next, wedding, her mother, etc... :)
    February 13th, 2014 at 03:25am
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved this story! very sad her mother couldn't come around, but people will think what they want, no matter whats good for them! loved it, this was overall amazing!
    January 2nd, 2014 at 05:46am
  • riellybabie101

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    Loved this story! very sad her mother couldn't come around, but people will think what they want, no matter whats good for them! loved it, this was overall amazing!
    January 2nd, 2014 at 05:46am
  • rarelytiredlights

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    this was such a great story.

    the fight between her and her mother was really heart-breaking and I wish it could have ended differently. I'd like to think that eventually her mother will come around, but I guess that is left to our own interpretation. the last chapter was the sweetest. brian's an amazing guy and he's one one that she can't live without. you get a guy like that in your life, you don't let him go for nothing. and the rainbow hair comment - oh my god. I was thinking of troll dolls.
    December 19th, 2013 at 01:32am
  • Rocket Queen

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    SWEET HOLY JESUS.
    That was one mother-effing hell of a fight if I ever saw one. My God... I'm just glad that Lyndsey finally got the chance to stand up to her mother and tell her exactly how she's felt every single time her mother bad mouths herself, her career and Brian. The emotion was practically just gushing out of this chapter that I couldn't help but nearly get a little teary myself when Lyndsey was getting so frustrated when her mother wasn't listening and when she said she was done.

    And the last chapter! OMG. I didn't want it to end! EVER EVER EVER. It was just so perfect the way it ended with just Brian and Lyndsey together and his comment about ginger babies! So funny. So Brian lol. And how he was trying to convince her that maybe her mother will come around eventually... CAN WE SAY SEQUEL?!? I'd be totally interested to see how your wonderful mind handles something like that. :)
    December 17th, 2013 at 05:10pm
  • synystergirl

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    Oh I'm going to miss this story - so sad to see it has come to an end. Thanks for such a wonderful story and hope to read more from you soon.
    December 5th, 2013 at 03:45am
  • AJ9

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    I can't believe this is over Sad. I'm going to miss this. It was an awesome last chapter though and I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future xx Mr. Green
    December 4th, 2013 at 02:44pm
  • fairjer0620

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    Love. Sweet ending, laughed at the ginger baby part since I have a ginger baby. Very Happy seriously, this was great. Can't wait for your next story.
    December 4th, 2013 at 10:10am
  • pekigirl

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    aww I loved this story so much! And this last chapter daamn... I laughed really hard about the babies' hair comments ahahah 'rainbow hair' ahahah awesome xD God, I'm sad this is over but I understand :) great story though and I loved it :D
    December 4th, 2013 at 08:48am
  • Call The Angels

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    My favorite line in this chapter is still the ginger baby/rainbow haired kids comment. So fucking cute. Hell, Brian is just cute in this story in general. I LOVED this story, and I'm going to miss it. :)

    LOVED IT!
    December 4th, 2013 at 07:01am
  • gipsy danger.

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    HER MOTHER STILL MAKES ME SO ANGRY
    but oh my gosh ginger babies and rainbow haired children. I love Brian, Mr. Pissy Pants is freaking sweet and ohhh man yeah! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER
    AND I LOVED THIS STORY
    I AM SAD THAT IT IS OVER
    BUT I AM EXCITED FOR MORE FLUFFY WONDERFULNESS!
    December 4th, 2013 at 06:58am
  • riellybabie101

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    So sad that her mom couldn't be more excepting! Ahhh glad she finally stood up for herself though! loved it!
    December 2nd, 2013 at 10:57pm
  • gothique4

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    Yes, thank God she finally told that controlling bitch where to go. Oh man, I was really hoping that she'd slap her. I thought my mum was bad but she's like the Queen of Selfishness. Unfortunately I have a feeling that she's gonna shove that stick up her ass even further and go after Brian for "stealing" her daughter away like she's some kind of possession :-(
    November 18th, 2013 at 10:48am
  • synystergirl

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    Ohhhh great chapter!! Please hurry with the next one - can't wait to see what happens next!!
    November 15th, 2013 at 04:22am
  • shelbyleighjones

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    Love this story! (:
    November 14th, 2013 at 12:44am