Drown - Comments

Wow, im really sorry to hear about your friend. I just went through this with a very close family member. It sucks. All I can recommend is banding together with loved ones and helping each other in such a hard time. My sincerest condolences:(
Onto th update, it was amazing as always. I loved Johnny's wisdom, hes pretty smart for a wee man:P

"Don't make me do this again, okay? This imparting wisdom bullshit just isn't my thing." - I do love the way you have portrayed Johnny in this story!! He cracks me up!!

I loved this chapter, just like I love this whole story. You're very good at writing Brian as an unnecessary arse :) he's always getting himself in trouble with you because he has no filter and doesn't think before he opens his mouth. And I think that's hilarious!! Tee hee. x

I'm so sorry for the loss of your friend. I know how you feel - I lost my dad on May 31st. It's not easy at all. My thoughts are with you in this difficult time.

And your story is absolutely great and very well written. Kep those updates coming - love it!!

I'm very sorry for your loss. I've been very fortunate thus far in my life - I've yet to lose anyone close to me. I wish I had words of wisdom to share; the closest I can get is to offer my condolences.

I am really enjoying this story! You are an excellent writer. For the most part, I know that stories on Mibba are essentially short stories. I can definitely see your story being fleshed out into a novel. And I'd be happy to buy it! Keep the chapters coming!

Oh sweet little Johnny. Bless his little gnome heart. Thank goodness he was able to talk a bit of sense into Brian. I think anyone else would have tried to beat the sense into him, and that really wasn't what he needed at that time. It's nice to get some insight from his crazy head though.

Loved the update dear. And I love you. <3

Johnny, oh Johnny how I love thee. He just seems like the biggest asshole sometimes but then he knows man. He just knows about everyone and he has words of wisdom. It's like "WELL OKAY THEN GANDHI!"
I absolutely loved the chapter. It was fantastic, beautiful, I just love it. And I love seeing Brian's point of view and reading his thoughts on the situation. And man I just want to give him a big hug right now.
AMAZING UPDATE!!

and you know I am here if you ever need to talk <333

Ugh Brian needs a slap upside the head. I think he's avoiding her a bit now because he feels a bit guilty about how he's been treating her and he's still a bit freaked out about how close he came to losing her.

it's clear that brian is finally realizing how shitty he's been acting over the past few days, and not only is he feeling the guilt over that, but just judging by the chapter title, he's blaming himself for what happened. he's extremely angry at himself, but i'm not sure he realizes that he is still taking it out on her. he needs to talk to her about it (calmly) and stop treating her this way, because he's upsetting her and only making it worse between them.

Urg, you are so talented it hurts. I love this, I can't get over just how much I love this. I'm not sure why Brian is being a dumby, besides obviously being terrified he might have lost her but I'm excited for the upcoming chapters. I'm sure you're going to throw more wrenches in there, you love to torture me. Great job lovely <3

Well....during chapters 1 through 3 it seemed like he didnt really even care about her...

Like maybe someone was wrong.
But during the last chapter Brian's quick reaction seemed to say otherwise.

So I'd say he is upset about almost losing her.
But either way...HE NEEDS TO GET THE EFF OVER HIMSELF.
This is my final consensus. Ha.

I am in love with this! So happy you updated again. I feel so bad for Lyndsey, Brian needs to man up. He's acting like such a child!
Seriously, this is a wonderful piece of writing. Can't wait to read more.

Awww this made me cry. Brian is being an idiot. I hope they talk soon and make up!
Great add!

I think he's just pissed in general. Probably more so with himself for the way he's acted and scared because he cold have lost her and almost did.so yeah, I think that he's just a big ball of emotion and needs to talk about it instead of being mute. Update soon please!

Brian can be such a little drama queen sometimes! I think he's just upset with himself. If they didn't fight then maybe Johnny would have just gone to the store or better yet if she had just listened to him about staying home he wouldn't have thought he lost her.

I don't want this story to end, but I know that some day it will.

Good GOD Brian is such a brat sometimes. I mean really. Though, I'm sure he's being a brat because he blames himself. After all, before he found out you'd fallen in everyone had been on his ass about how rude he was being to you, and we all know that's why you even went with Johnny. He's no dumby.

Well, he is, but he isn't.

And bless Johnny's sweet little heart. This made me just want to hug him.

By the way... WWOHP... I want to go sooooo bad. You have NO idea. Soooo would be a group field trip.

Ah, I'm seriously in love with your fluffy duffy(?) stories! I think Brian is blaming himself. I can't wait to read more of your wonderful writing! <3

My god Brian. Can you been even more of a pissy pants? Like seriously? Your girl just fell into freezing water, almost died, got hypothermia, and looks kind of horrible right now. You wanna pull up your big boy pants and be a man? SEEEEEEESH. lmfao.
BUT JOHNNY. Oh Johnny, he is such a sweetheart. He needs all the hugs.
I absolutely loved this chapter! It was amazing!! AMAZING even the second time around. Perfect.
And Johnny in WWOHP... ;)

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This story is too cute :D bet Brian feels like a dick now! Update soon :)

urgurgurg.
why do i never have the proper words? cant even accurately explain how wonderful and perfect this was. So beautiful, painful, worrying, perfection. I love this. I love you.

Ah, this is amazing. <3