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@Daryl Dixon
Believe me, I love this story more than anyone. If I could make it go on forever, I absolutely would! Never know, there may be a continuation of sorts in the future. You know how my brain works, always some pointless pieces of fluffy goodness floating around the cobwebs :P

Finally she told her mother off. FINALLY. I love this story, make it go on forever? :)

Oh holy moley!! That was a bit intense!! I feel the need to be a bit controversial here...does one perhaps think her mother is being such an asshat because she is scared of Lyndsey getting hurt like she did when her dad left them?? Just putting it out there :D having said this, if this is the case, her mother needs to be introduced to a wonderful thing called tact!! If this isn't the case, she needs to be introduced to a smack upside the head!! Either way, the woman needs to deal with her issues!!

I loved this chapter!! Not the happiest of chapters to wake up to but wonderful nonetheless. I am rather hoping that a puppy is bought at the beginning of the next chapter as that would just make me giggle like a loon!! Tee hee. Autocorrects do make me chuckle!!

I cannot wait for more!! <3

I'm proud of her for standing up to her mother! I'm glad she decided to put her foot down. It was tough, but I'm glad she did it!

hehe! I'm with Raychel! The puppy autocorrect STILL cracks me up.

This chapter just breaks my heart. I can't imagine how hard it would be to be pulled in opposite directions because your family hated the man you loved. I spent the whole chapter just wanting to hug you, and slap your mom upside her head. Such an emotional chapter. I loved it!

Come home soon so I can get that puppy.
I LAUGH SO HARD EVERY TIME I READ THAT

and oh my gosh this chapter makes me so angry! Like you wrote her mother so well, like so ugh, like so makes so so angry mad. I absolutely love it! LOVE IT. How you can make me feel so angry over a mother. Like holy moley you are fantastic. And I absolutely loved this chapter! It was FANTASTIC as always! <3333

I love the way that the 'Breathe' chapter turned out. You can really tell that you put a lot of effort into it because it really shows through in the writing. Plus I like how angry Brian was in this chapter where he basically just feels like punching everyone out because he's so concerned about Lyndsey and feels like a total jackass for treating her the way that he did. That's what makes it totally sweet in the end where he gets into bed with her and just pulls her close and holds her to try and keep her warm. I was totally aww'ing all over the place. xD

Aw, the little moment Lyndsey had with Johnny was the sweetest. I love how Jimmy hugged her about five times, lol. AND THEN THE GROUP HUG. But Lyndsey's mind is elsewhere... she's still worried about Brian and that goddamned attitude of his! That boy had better apologize soon, that's all I can say.
The moment in the kitchen with the girls and then asking what it was like to be in the ice, I totally wasn't expecting that. I guess because in most stories if something really bad happened to a character, they usually just gloss over it and have the other characters just comforting them. So it was actually nice to see them addressing the issue in this chapter because it seems realistic. Like if your best friend had nearly died, you'd totally have this morbid curiosity of what it felt like when it was happening to them and what they were feeling at the time. I thought that that was a nice touch.
AND GODDAMN IT BRIAN. GET OFF YOUR FUCKING PERIOD.

Okay, so this chapter was probably my most favourite so far. I AM SO TORN WITH BRIAN. On one hand, I knew he was acting like a distant asshole because he was so worried about Lyndsey and was blaming himself hardcore for what had happened to her. BUT HIS BEHAVIOUR. My God. I just don't know if I can forgive him for the way he's been treating her and making her feel like shit. Johnny was amazing in this chapter though! He just about gave Brian the verbal beat down that that boy needed to put things into perspective.

HOLY. SHIT. SEXY TIMES GALORE. Seriously, my eyes were glued to the goddamn screen lol. But the talk between the two of them are the beginning of that chapter was really nice, how Lynds was trying to convince Brian he really saved her and how he FINALLY apologized to her about how he's been acting. That was a really great moment between the pair.

SHORT CHAPTER IS SHORT. But definitely necessary because Lynds finally got the story of her mother out and now they're both on good terms again with each other! LIFE IS GOOD.

Aw, what a sweet chapter. They're both so maddeningly in love with each other that it almost makes me sick with jealousy lmao. I just love how Lynds has decided that it's time to stop fighting with her mother and her family about her own life because it just isn't worth. Because she's just so happy about her own future that none of it really matters all that much. Love the girl's optimism and I can't wait to see what happens next!

ITS ALMOST OVER AND I'M GOING TO BE SO SAD.

I'm hoping that she can stand up to her mother and tell her where to go and give her directions on how to get there.

Loved the update!

I love it! Update soon!

awwwww, I'm all warm and fuzzy inside. they are just so precious. :)

not too sure how it will go with her mother. part of me hopes if she's stern enough, her mother will realize that if she wants to be a part of her daughter's life, she needs to accept the man she loves. and part of me thinks her mom is way too stubborn and judgmental to budge. I hope for both of their sakes that the former happens.

Okay so your relationship with Brian in this story just makes me so happy :) you may have your squabbles but at the end of it all, you're so cute and loved up!! And so bloody adorable :)

I cannot wait for the confrontation with the mother!! It's just going to ge a hoot I can tell :P loved this!! And love you ♡

I missed this story :') loved the chapter and I'm really curious to see how her mother will react

I'm looking forward to her confrontation with her mother .... but ..... I'm so gonna miss this when it's finished.

Please update soon xx

Oh Brian. Such a damned cutie. Seriously. I had more to say in this comment but then I got started stuffing my face during my lunch break and totally forgot what I was going to say other than ranting and raving about how cute you and Brian are in this. Precious.

Loved it! Ahh only three more!? how time flies..

In my sleepiness last night, I totally FORGOT that you updated this! Stupid me!
This is such a sweet, cute chapter though. Brian is being such a damn darling.
Loved the update dear. :)

I've read all nine chapters now and I'm itching for more . I'm sad it's nearly ending but I've really enjoyed it and I'm looking forward to the next update.

Oh my God, yay!!! There are so few stories on here that I am subscribed to that I actively look for updates on, and this is one of them, so I'm so happy to see a new chapter.

Which means I should probably get off the slacking and update my stories, huh?

Love it!

I'm so glad you updated this - I've been waiting. But I understand why it took a while. I'm very sorry to hear about your friend and I understand. I lost my dad at the end of May and it really takes a lot out of you. I hope you're doing a little better now. And I can't wait for the next update - still loving this story!!!