Drown - Comments

See this is the Brian we all know and love!! Sweet, understanding but still with a smirk here and there when he's about to be a pain in the behind :D loved it!!!!!! I simply cannot wait for more :) x

Ahh! This is just so fricken perfect! I love your writing! It's so descriptive and love filled! I can tell you put a lot of your own emotion into it! Can't wait to see how Lynds and Brian spent the next few days together(;

YES I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I do!
It's so simple and so perfect.
And pffft her mom needs to CHILL OUT. I still don't like her. I will never like her mom. Rude lady!

Yeah, leave us all behind without telling anyone you're leaving. I SEE HOW IT IS!
haha I loved it!! <333

You are actually such a beautiful writer, I can't seem to get over it no matter how many chapters I read. Everything sounds so natural and effortless, like the story is writing itself, and that's just amazing. I don't even know. This whole thing gave me the chills. I love it, love it, love it! I'm stuck with what to say now, I just... you're a beautiful person and your writing makes you justice. I really hope one day you decide to try and sell your work, because there are so many mediocre authors out there and readers deserve you just as you deserve as many of them as you can get. Keep being wonderful and update whenever you're ready. I'll be waiting. <3

yay, nothing like hot steamy make-up sex to make my cold house a bit warmer :p

I'm glad that he got it off his chest - it's no excuse for why he was running around so butt hurt in the first place but at least he's opened up and told her how sorry he is

Yes they finally made up though I'm still confused to why Brian was acting that much of a prick but i get the alone time thing. Awesome that they made up in more ways than one I love this story and I hope you update soon!

Soo the makeup sex took me by surprise.
Why? I don't know. Because I mean... come one. It's YOU... and it's a Brian story. It was inevitable.
But hot DAMN.
Also, it's about damn time he got his head out of his ass.
Loved it! :)

ahh finally. i'm so glad brian finally talked to her and they were able to work everything out between them. and make-up sex never hurts either, right? ;)

ahh finally. i'm so glad brian finally talked to her and they were able to work everything out between them. and make-up sex never hurts either, right?

loved it!

AW YES THE APOLOGIES
I just love this chapter, finally talking to each other and getting down to business. And then gettin' some ;) It was absolutely perfect, yes ma'am it was! <333

Oh my God, YAY! Glad to see you back writing, but totally understand your absence. Now, if only I could get my own stories to stop giving me fits. Loved this update, love this story and I actually have a minute to comment thanks to my husband wrangling my son! <3

oh my god, I loved the chapter :)

Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooved it!!

I'm so glad you two kissed and made up...among other things ;) tee hee.

I can't wait for more ducky!! Literally...can't wait...on the edge of my seat here people!!!! :D x

I'm so glad that little Johnny was able to talk some sense into Brian's head and I can only hope that when he goes to talk to her they don't end up arguing again.

I'm sorry to hear about your friend xx. One of my friends passed from cancer 2 years ago and not a week goes by when I don't think about him but I'm thankful that he's not in pain anymore

Loved the update! sorry to hear about your friend.

and of course, johnny is the voice of reason once again. glad he's helping brian get his head out of his ass. ;) hopefully they can work things out once and for all

so sorry to hear about your friend, lyndsey. i know that it's never easy to lose someone, regardless of the circumstances. always here

Lindsay. Babe. I am here for you if you need me. This chapter was beautiful, your writing always is but I'm going to choose to focus on you instead. I love you. I'm here if you need me.

Lindsay. Babe. I am here for you if you need me. This chapter was beautiful, your writing always is but I'm going to choose to focus on you instead. I love you. I'm here if you need me.

great chapter as usual ^.^ loved it...
and hey.. if you ever need to talk, don't hesitate :) I may not know you but I'm a good listener. I'm really sorry about what happened. It sucks. That's the bottom line, but you'll get through it. I know it!
Anyway, take your time. We'll be patient, okay?
<3