Bay Boy - Comments

@ Sleepingwithvic
Thank you!

I really like this, it's really well written and so cute! I can tell you proof read it. A lot of people forget to do that and it gets pretty annoying reading silly mistakes that could have easily been avoided. Keep it up :D

Aww they said they loved eachother. Hope you update soon

This story is so self-aware, and in a good way. The tone that you write Milena is really smooth and care-free. I hope that's what you were going for. I like it, a lot. As a Canadian, I know a lot about hockey that I don't want to, but this story actually seems intriguing and I will certainly come back to read the rest another day as well as keep up with it.

@ lexwashere22
Thanks for commenting Lex! You're literally the perfect reader

Awww that was so cute. I'm so glad they are together :).

Comment swap:
First and foremost, I felt so blind reading this. lol, you could definately add more spacing in the paragraphs and maybe make the text a bit bigger.
I'm not familiar with this fanbase, so I can't say much on that. But you're very descriptive and that's always good! Keep up the good work!

@ lexwashere22
Me too! I was hitting some serious writer's block ugh

I'm glad you updated :). Poor Mila she is so torn.

love this. Update soon

@ pulpxfiction
Thanks!

This just keeps getting better! Also, Jordan is adorable. :3

@ MMM26
Y'all better give me ideas about what you expect from a Staal Christmas!
P.S I updated the characters and added Mila's dad

@ lexwashere22
Not gonna lie that was one of my favorite chapters to write

OMG he loves her! ahhhh that's so flippin cute :D

That's a BIG step but it would be adorable!

aww they are so sweet together. i'm excited for Christmas with the staals ;)

@ One Erection
Thanks so much! I hope you like the new chapter :)

Comment Swap-

Oh my God... This isn't my normal cup of tea I usually read but I may have just fallen in love with this story. I love the way it's written! I love how everything is almost perfect! This story is just really well put and amazing. My first hockey fic. I've read before and I'm glad it was this one. Please keep up the great work and I look for to seeing more chapters!

hi, comment swap brought me here! i read all of this in one sitting. it was very good. your writing style is magnificent.. the way you described your characters to the way the chapters seem to flow. keep doing what you're doing.