February 13th, 2013 at 11:18pm
I've been brought here by Comment Swap :)
I really liked this, to be honest. I'm not all that big on sports, but It was interesting. c:
The layout, I noticed, was the original Mibba layout without a background. I think you should change it up a bit, and make the layout unique. I like looking at them. c:
Spacing should probably be addressed, but it looks like someone already has.
I won't say too much, because I really believe that you should write for your own entertainment and pleasure, not anyone else's.
Anyways, keep up the good work! I really did like this. I strongly encourage you to continue writing, because I'll defiantly be subscribing! <3
Once again, write for your OWN entertainment. Don't let any of the comments, including mine, change your perspective on this story, or where it's going. Write what you want to the way you want to. c:
Stay Beautiful xxx
I really liked this, to be honest. I'm not all that big on sports, but It was interesting. c:
The layout, I noticed, was the original Mibba layout without a background. I think you should change it up a bit, and make the layout unique. I like looking at them. c:
Spacing should probably be addressed, but it looks like someone already has.
I won't say too much, because I really believe that you should write for your own entertainment and pleasure, not anyone else's.
Anyways, keep up the good work! I really did like this. I strongly encourage you to continue writing, because I'll defiantly be subscribing! <3
Once again, write for your OWN entertainment. Don't let any of the comments, including mine, change your perspective on this story, or where it's going. Write what you want to the way you want to. c:
Stay Beautiful xxx