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  • MMM26

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    Yay!!!!
    February 7th, 2013 at 01:59am
  • lexwashere22

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    omg yes :) woohooo
    February 7th, 2013 at 01:34am
  • Katriner

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    awww - i like the ending... its really cute - and you have a good way to write - you totally can picture the story in your head when reading... :) thumps up :)
    February 7th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • amykart

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    @ lexwashere22
    thanks
    February 6th, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • lexwashere22

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    love it :)
    February 6th, 2013 at 02:53am
  • amykart

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    @ lexwashere22
    Aw thanks! Glad you like it :)
    February 5th, 2013 at 08:42pm
  • amykart

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    @ nemolover225
    I might not always update as much, I've just had very little schoolwork lately.
    February 5th, 2013 at 08:42pm
  • MMM26

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    Adorable!
    February 5th, 2013 at 05:11am
  • lexwashere22

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    ok this story is so cute. i love it so much. It seriously brightens my day when i see that you updated :)
    February 5th, 2013 at 04:48am
  • lexwashere22

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    ok this story is so cute. i love it so much. It seriously brightens my day when i see that you updated :)
    February 5th, 2013 at 04:48am
  • nemolover225

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    I love how much you update!
    February 5th, 2013 at 03:35am
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    @ MMM26
    Thank so much :) They kissed again, hope it met your expectations!
    February 5th, 2013 at 01:34am
  • MMM26

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    I really like the story line so far. They need to kiss again already!
    February 4th, 2013 at 07:40am
  • lexwashere22

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    you're welcome :). i loved it again lol
    February 4th, 2013 at 03:19am
  • amykart

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    @ lexwashere22
    Thanks for commenting so much! Feedback is awesome. I'll try to get the next chapter posted tonight
    February 4th, 2013 at 01:38am
  • lexwashere22

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    this was really cute :). Jordan's pov would be awesome
    February 4th, 2013 at 01:26am
  • lexwashere22

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    i really love this story, it's really well written :)
    February 3rd, 2013 at 07:28pm
  • amykart

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    @nemolover225 Thank you!
    February 2nd, 2013 at 09:19pm
  • nemolover225

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    I really like this story!!
    February 2nd, 2013 at 09:19pm
  • nomountainhighenough

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    One little bit of criticism... Can you break it up into smaller paragraphs? Maybe a new one every time the speaker changes. It's just hard to read when it's in huge chunks like this. Otherwise I like it!
    February 2nd, 2013 at 06:58am
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