Fifty Words for Embarrassment - Comments

This was awesome! Will totally read the sequel about Flo :)

I get the summary now & I love the ending :)
Def. gonna check out Flo's story now ;)

Loved it!

The last chapter = perfect ❤

Anazing story, cat wait for the epilogue and sequel.

Oooooooh I read it see? *grins*
Can't wait for the epilogue & the sequel
Update soon!<3

Thank you for an amazing and inspirational story! I am excited for the sequel!

This was such a good story. You had me by the fingernails for most of it. I'm glad they're finally together. I can't wait to see what happens between Flo and Marcus. :D

They finally got together!
Oh, no! :o What's going to happen to Flo and Marcus?

DID MARCUS BREAK UP WITH FLO? D:

Does Flo running to her room have something to do with what Reed wanted to say?

Nononononononononoooo!!!!!! Ba cliffhanger bad!!! I wanted to know what Reed had to say and what the hell just happened to Flo?!?!? WHAT IS GOING ON?!?!?!

So disappointed in Lionel but I hope everything works out! I don't want it to be awkward for the band. I am warming up a bit to Reed again.

Reed was so sweet in this chapter! I can't wait for the next one. Good luck on your finals!

I want to know more about the kid!!! And I love how her and Reed have progressed. I know that it was hard for her to be weak. Anyway, I hope you can try and update soon. I want to know what will happen.

I want to know more about the kid!!! And I love how her and Reed have progressed. I know that it was hard for her to be weak. Anyway, I hope you can try and update soon. I want to know what will happen.

Dun dun dun...! Who could it be?!
Great update, can't wait for the next one :D

I liked Reed's reaction, or well, his actions. How he took care of Rhea, made sure she was all right. Though something tells me he's saving a real big bitch out for when he sees his brother. Because really, how could he not? Totally wondering who's at the door. Another wonderful update. =)

What the fuck Lionel? Douche bag to the extreme. Lisel? Who the fuck? Okay, now I really need details. Plllleeeaaaassaeeee update soon! I'm confused. Is she Lisel's mom? Or what? What's going in?

I was debating if I should comment or not because I´m not sure if people like honest comments here, but if I had a story here I guess I would like for people to tell me what they really think. I love this story, the narration is very original and it makes it easier to read, as if I were talking to Rhea myself, I like that. And Reed is a very believable charachter. I just think the whole Lisel thing seemed a little forced (in my opinion), because we´d never heard of her before and now we´re told she was a big part of Rhea´s life. I dont know, maybe that´s the way you wanted it, to seem sudden. I don´t say that in a mean way, really, I just like when people tell me about details like that in my stories. Anyway, I hope you update soon, I´m very curious about how Reed is going to react to what happened with Lionel!